Exodus 24 — The Mister Translation
Notes on this translation
A mountain in tiers, and a sentence that names its speaker only by pronoun
This chapter opens mid-sentence. The Hebrew of v1 literally reads “and to Moses HE said” — no subject named, because none is needed: the speech that fills chapters 20 through 23 has run unbroken from Jehovah’s own mouth, and the chapter division here (a medieval addition, not part of the Hebrew text’s own units) cuts across a single continuing utterance. Four chapters after “Jehovah” was last the grammatical subject, the pronoun still reaches back to him without a hiccup.
The instruction he gives — ‘worship from a distance’ — turns out to be the blueprint for the whole chapter. Access to Sinai is graded in three concentric rings, and each will hold exactly where it is set here: the people stay at the foot and never climb at all in this scene; Aaron, Nadab, Abihu, and the seventy elders go partway up and see God (vv9–11) but go no further; Moses alone crosses into the cloud itself (v2, v13, vv15–18). A single verse of stage directions, and the rest of the chapter blocks it out exactly.
Two oaths, a book, and a sentence Jesus will quote at his own last meal
The people swear twice, and the second oath adds one word the first did not have. At v3, before a single law has been written down, they answer ‘all the words that Jehovah has spoken, we will do’ — consent given on report alone. Only after that does Moses WRITE what he has told them (v4, the Bible’s first mention of God’s law as a written book) and read it back aloud (v7) — and this second time the people answer ‘we will do, AND WE WILL HEAR’ (na’aseh ve-nishma). Rabbinic tradition (Talmud, Shabbat 88a) has long read the order as the whole point: they commit to obey before they have heard enough to understand what obedience will cost. ⚠ ‘Hear’ in Hebrew regularly does double duty for ‘obey’ — and the whole English shelf takes that reading here: KJV and ASV both print ‘will we do, and BE OBEDIENT’, and NIV ‘we will do… we will OBEY’ — none of the three keeps the plain verb ‘hear’ itself. This translation departs from all of them and keeps ‘we will hear’ literally, so the ambiguity the rabbis built a teaching on stays visible rather than being resolved for the reader in advance.
⚠ The twelve pillars (v4) are not a new idea — they are Jacob’s idea, multiplied by twelve. The word is matzevah, the exact term for the single stone Jacob set up and anointed at Bethel (Genesis 28:18, already on these pages). One patriarch’s private memorial becomes twelve national ones in a single verse — one pillar for every tribe descended from his own twelve sons, without the text ever pointing out the connection itself.
⚠ The blood is split in two, and each half goes to a different party in the agreement. Half is dashed against the altar (v6) — God’s side of the transaction — and half is kept back until the book has been read and the second oath sworn, then thrown on the people themselves (v8), with the words this translation renders exactly as the Hebrew has them: ‘Behold the blood of the covenant.’ Roughly thirteen centuries later, at a Passover meal, those five words are picked up almost verbatim over a cup of wine — see Matthew 26:26–29 (already on these pages), whose own note names this exact verse as the source being echoed.
⚠ They see God, eat lunch, and the text does not treat these as different kinds of remarkable
‘They saw the God of Israel’ is one of the most theologically unguarded sentences in the whole Torah, and the detail the text chooses to give is architectural, not visual: a pavement. Under his feet is ‘something like a pavement of sappir’ — almost certainly lapis lazuli rather than the modern gem called sapphire, since the ancient word covers a wider stone family than the modern one does. KJV and ASV both keep ‘a paved work of sapphire stone’; NIV updates the material outright, to ‘lapis lazuli’, confirming the same identification. ⚠ Rashi reads the pavement itself as a deliberate memorial: the Hebrew for ‘pavement’ is livnat, built from the same root as levenah, ‘brick’ — the very word for what Israel was forced to make in Egypt — so that God, on his commentary, keeps the memory of that slave labor literally under his own feet even now.
‘They beheld God, and ate and drank’ (v11) states the impossible in the plainest verbs available. No fire, no trembling, no warning that this should be fatal — a meal, essentially. ⚠ The shelf barely blinks at the directness: KJV and NIV both simply read ‘they SAW God’; only ASV softens the verb slightly, to ‘beheld’, the reading this translation follows. Jacob made the identical claim generations earlier, in almost the same words: ‘I have seen God face to face, and my life was delivered’ (Genesis 32:30, already on these pages). Both survive; neither text explains why. This book itself will later state a flat prohibition — no one may see Jehovah’s face and live, at Exodus 33:20, not yet on these pages — and centuries after that, a Gospel opens by generalizing the same rule outright: ‘no one has ever seen God’ (John 1:18, already on these pages, whose own note names Exodus 33:20 as the verse it is echoing). This chapter simply does not know that rule yet, or stands as its deliberate exception, seventy-four witnesses at a time (Moses, Aaron, Nadab, Abihu, and the seventy elders together); this translation reports the tension rather than resolving it.
Joshua and Hur again — the same two names, promoted to the same job twice
‘Come up to me… I will give you the tablets of stone… that I have written’ (v12) is the first time in Exodus God says the tablets already exist — written before they are ever handed over, promised here and not delivered until several chapters ahead, not yet on these pages.
Joshua climbs partway up as Moses’ own aide (v13); his first appearance anywhere in the Bible, unintroduced and already trusted with troops, was one chapter back at Exodus 17:9 (already on these pages, where the note on his name — likely still Hoshea at this point, renamed Yehoshua only much later — is laid out in full). And Aaron and Hur are left in joint charge of the camp below (v14) — the exact same pairing, the exact same job, as Exodus 17:10–12, whose own note flagged this very verse by number and promised the repeat before this chapter existed.
Six days of waiting, then a fire that does the one thing the bush's fire refused to do
The cloud covers the mountain for six days before Jehovah calls to Moses on the seventh (vv15–16) — the same six-then-seven rhythm that closes the creation account (Genesis 2:2–3, already on these pages), restaged here not as work-then-rest but as waiting-then-revelation. The pattern is not commented on; it simply recurs — and it recurs a third time, centuries later: ‘after six days’ is the exact phrase that opens the Transfiguration (Matthew 17:1, already on these pages, whose own note calls these six days ‘unmistakably… Sinai’s’), on a mountain where Moses himself reappears.
⚠ ‘The appearance of the glory of Jehovah was like a devouring fire’ (v17) is the same divine fire that once did the opposite. At the bush, the whole marvel was restraint: it ‘was burning with fire, yet was not consumed’ (Exodus 3:2, already on these pages, whose own note names Horeb as ‘the height the book also calls Sinai’) — the very mountain this chapter is standing on. Now the same fire is described as actively devouring. Whatever changed between a shepherd catching sight of a curious bush and a whole nation watching from the foot of the same peak is left to the reader; the text offers only the two pictures, chapters apart, and does not reconcile them.
The chapter closes on a number that will define Moses’ relationship to this mountain for the rest of the book: forty days and forty nights (v18), the identical span already used for the flood (Genesis 7:4, already on these pages, whose own note calls forty a number whose ‘biblical career’ is only just beginning there). This is the first of what tradition counts as up to three separate forty-day stretches Moses spends on Sinai across Exodus; the most famous of them, with the added detail that he ate no bread the whole time, comes later at Exodus 34:28 (not yet on these pages) — the exact formula Matthew 4 borrows by name when Jesus fasts in the wilderness (already on these pages, its own note naming ‘Moses on the mountain’ directly, alongside Elijah’s identical forty days at 1 Kings 19:8, not yet on these pages). Three fasts, one number, and this chapter is where it starts.
Notes on this translation
Decisions. ‘Pillars’ kept for matzevah (v4), consistent with the rendering already fixed at Genesis 28. ‘Book’ for sefer (v7) rather than ‘scroll’, since the word’s own semantic range covers both and this is its first appearance naming a portion of the Torah itself. ‘We will do, and we will hear’ kept as two separate verbs (v7), rather than collapsing the second into ‘obey’ outright, so the ambiguity rabbinic tradition built an entire teaching on stays visible in English. Verse numbering follows the Hebrew exactly; Hebrew and English Exodus 24 both run 1–18.
A note on order: Exodus stands on these pages at chapters 1–25. Exodus 25 is where the tabernacle instructions begin — the ark, the table, the lampstand. Exodus 26, the tabernacle's own frame and coverings, remains open, along with the rest of the book.