Genesis 17 — The Mister Translation
Translator's Notes — verse by verse
Each note explains this translation's choice and compares the seven versions on the shelf. Quotations from copyrighted versions (NIV, TLB, NWT) are kept to short phrases for comparison; KJV, Geneva, Douay-Rheims and ASV are public domain.
Thirteen silent years. Between the last verse of chapter 16 (Abram 86) and the first verse here (Abram 99), the text says nothing at all — thirteen years pass in the width of a chapter break, with Ishmael growing up as the only son. Then "Jehovah appeared" — the second appearance (the first was at Shechem, 12:7) — and announces a new name: "I am El Shaddai." The traditional rendering "God Almighty" (KJV ASV NIV NWT; Douay "the Almighty God") is a guess inherited from the Greek and Latin Bibles (pantokratōr, omnipotens) — the Hebrew meaning is genuinely uncertain: "God of the mountain" (Akkadian šadû), "God of the steppe," or a fertility word (Genesis 49:25 blesses, in one breath, "Shaddai… blessings of the breasts (shaddayim) and of the womb" — apt, in a chapter about a barren couple made fruitful). Geneva alone reads "God all sufficient" (an old rabbinic etymology, she-dai, "who is enough"). Mister keeps it as what it is — a name — untranslated.
"Walk before me, and be blameless." Two loaded words. Hithalekh is the walking-with-God verb of the early chapters — but Enoch and Noah walked with God (5:22, 6:9), and Abram is told to walk before him: not a stroll alongside, but a life lived in full view, out ahead, answerable. And "blameless" (tamim) is Noah's own word (6:9) — wholeness, integrity, soundness of a piece; not sinless perfection (the next chapters will show plenty of flaw). Unlike the covenant of chapter 15 — where Abram slept and God alone passed between the pieces — this covenant comes with commands attached: walk, be whole, keep, circumcise. The two chapters are a matched pair: the unconditional promise, and the answering obligation. "I will multiply you very, very much" — bimod me'od, the doubled "very" this translation keeps (as at the flood's "very, very" triumph, 7:19).
Abram becomes Abraham. The first person in the Bible God renames. The text supplies its own gloss: Avraham because av hamon goyim, "father of a multitude of nations" — a sound-echo more than a strict etymology (to the philologists, Abraham is most likely a dialect variant of Abram, "exalted father"; the text is punning, and says so by its ki, "for"). Hear the long arc: Babel grasped at a name (11:4), God promised to make Abram's name great (12:2) — and now he remakes the name itself, folding the promise into the syllables a man hears every time he is called. From this verse on the narration never says "Abram" again. Note also who is speaking: verse 1 says Jehovah appeared; from verse 3 the speaker is God (Elohim) throughout — the divine-name alternation the flood chapters showed, visible again here; readings differ on why, and this translation prints what stands.
The everlasting covenant, and its formula. "Kings shall come out of you" — planted, for Judah and David, a long way downstream. The covenant is brit olam, an everlasting covenant — the bow's phrase (9:16) — and verses 7–8 speak the sentence the rest of the Bible will never stop repeating: "to be God to you… and I will be their God." This is the covenant formula's first appearance — the line that returns at the exodus ("I will take you as my people, and I will be your God," Exodus 6:7), in the law, the prophets, and at the very end ("they will be his people, and God himself will be with them," Revelation 21:3). It begins here, said to one old man. And the land is granted under a striking title: "the land of your sojournings" (megurekha, from the root of ger, "resident stranger" — 15:13's word) — an everlasting possession, promised to a man who owns not one field of it and lives in it as a guest.
"You shall keep my covenant." The verb is shamar — keep, guard, watch over: the human's garden vocation (2:15), the duty Cain disowned ("am I my brother's keeper?", 4:9) — now the covenant itself is the thing to keep. And its sign: as the bow was "the sign of the covenant" hung in the sky for God to see (9:12-13), this sign is cut into the body and carried — ot brit, the covenant made flesh, at eight days old. Circumcision itself was not new (Egyptians and other neighbors practiced it — Jeremiah 9:25-26 lists them); what is new is the meaning: not a rite of manhood at puberty or marriage, but a mark of membership, given to an infant who has done nothing and can promise nothing — grace before achievement, in the flesh.
The whole household — and the hard pun. The sign crosses the bloodline: "the one born in your house, and the one bought with money from any foreigner" — the household's slaves, that is; the text includes them in the covenant without blushing, and this translation names what they are rather than upholstering it. The covenant community begins as a mixed multitude. Then verse 14 closes on wordplay with teeth: Hebrew "cuts" covenants (karat brit, 15:18 — the cut animals), and the male who will not be cut "shall be cut off (venikhretah) from his people" — the penalty rhymes with the refusal. "He has broken my covenant" — hefar, annulled, made void. The closed break {ס} ends the paragraph.
Sarai becomes Sarah. The second renaming — and the first woman God renames. This time the text offers no gloss: both forms mean "princess" (Sarai the older spelling, Sarah the newer); the change is not in the meaning but in the standing — the next verse crowns it: "kings of peoples shall come from her." For the first time the promise is fastened explicitly to Sarah's own body — "I will give you a son from her" — and she is blessed twice in one verse (the Hebrew repeats; this translation keeps both). After chapter 16's workaround through Hagar, the covenant line runs, God insists, through the barren woman herself.
Abraham laughed. Face down before God — and laughing: vayitschaq. "Shall a child be born to a man a hundred years old?" The shelf all admit the laugh (KJV "fell upon his face, and laughed"), though the old Aramaic Targum softened it to "rejoiced" — while leaving Sarah's laugh in the next chapter as laughter, a double standard the commentators have enjoyed ever since. God is not offended; he is exact. "No — Sarah your wife shall bear you a son, and you shall call his name Isaac" — Yitschaq, "he laughs." The name is minted from the laugh itself: every time the boy is called, the father's incredulity — turned to joy — is spoken aloud. (The annunciation formula, "you shall call his name…," is the very syntax spoken over Ishmael at 16:11; the laughter, like the name, will run on — Sarah's turn comes at 18:12, and her "God has made laughter for me" at 21:6.) In between stands Abraham's counter-offer, tender and human: "If only Ishmael might live before you!" — he already has a son; let the one who exists be enough. Before you — the same "before" as "walk before me" (v1).
"As for Ishmael — I have heard you." The pun pays the boy's name in full: Yishma-El means "God hears" (16:11), and God answers the father's plea with the name's own verb — shema'tikha, "I have heard you." Even in the sentence that passes him over, Ishmael's name is honored. And the blessing is not small: fruitful, multiplied "very, very much," twelve princes (Genesis will list them, 25:12-16), and "a great nation" — the very phrase of Abram's own call (12:2). Ishmael receives Genesis-12 language; what he does not receive is the covenant: "but my covenant I will establish with Isaac." The line is drawn gently and absolutely at once.
"At this appointed time next year." Mo'ed — the "appointed times" of creation's calendar (1:14): the God who installed the fixed times of sun and moon now fixes one for a birth. It is the first hard date ever put on the promise — after twenty-four years of "I will," a year on the clock. Then "God went up from Abraham" — the audience ends as formally as it began.
"On that very same day." The phrase is a formula, and it has appeared once before: "on that very same day Noah entered the ark" (7:13) — the text's stamp for exact, unhesitating compliance. Abraham — who laughed on his face an hour ago in story-time — says not one recorded word; he takes Ishmael, the house-born and the money-bought, "every male among the men of Abraham's house," and does the thing, that day. The ledger then closes census-style, in the manner of chapter 5: Abraham 99, Ishmael 13 — a detail later tradition remembered: circumcision at thirteen remained the custom among Ishmael's Arab descendants, as the eighth day did in Israel. The first covenant community, counted on its first day, is a mixed multitude — one son, and a household of slaves and foreigners-by-birth, all bearing the same sign. The open break {פ} ends the chapter.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation sides with the literal shelf: the doubled "very, very much" kept all three times (vv 2, 6, 20), the doubled "I will bless her" kept (v16), and "walk before me and be blameless" with tamim rendered as at 6:9 (Noah's word).
Where it goes its own way: "El Shaddai" kept as a name, untranslated (the shelf's "Almighty" is a Greek-and-Latin guess; Geneva's lonely "God all sufficient" flagged), "father of a multitude" kept as the text's own sound-gloss on Abraham, and "cut off" left rhyming with the covenant that is "cut."
Echoes paid and planted. Paid: tamim and the walking verb from Noah and Enoch (6:9, 5:22 — with the shift from with God to before him); "everlasting covenant" and "the sign of the covenant" from the bow (9:12, 9:16); "on that very same day" from Noah's boarding (7:13); "I will make your name great" (12:2) fulfilled in the name itself; and "I have heard you" pays Ishmael's name (16:11), whose annunciation formula returns on Isaac. Planted: the covenant formula "I will be their God" (Exodus 6:7, and on to Revelation 21:3); kings from Abraham and Sarah; the laughter — Sarah's at 18:12, and "God has made laughter for me" at 21:6; "at this appointed time" (18:10, 14; 21:2); and the twelve princes of 25:12-16.
Next installment: Genesis 18 — three visitors at Mamre, Sarah's laugh, and "Shall not the Judge of all the earth do right?"