Deuteronomy 17 — The Mister Translation
The chapter opens on an animal, and it is not a stray verse. Mum is the technical word for a disqualifying physical defect, and this project has met it twice already: Leviticus 21:17–23 applies it to the priest who may not approach the altar, and Leviticus 22:20–25 to the animal he would bring. What makes this verse the right doorway into a chapter about courts is the phrase attached to it. The Hebrew is kol davar ra, anything bad at all — and four verses later the idolater is said to have done ha-davar ha-ra ha-zeh, this bad thing. The same two words describe a defective bull and a capital crime, and the same verb removes both of them from the community.
★ It also pays back the chapter you just read. Deuteronomy 15:21 ruled on the firstborn animal with kol mum ra, any bad blemish. One chapter later the phrase is loosened from the animal and turned on a person. Read consonantally across the whole Hebrew Bible, davar ra stands in seven verses, and it is a genuinely mixed set: this one, a soldier's camp that must keep itself from anything bad (Deuteronomy 23:10, now on these pages), the poisoned stew that Elisha makes safe (2 Kings 4:41), and four wisdom and psalm passages. Only here is it a technical disqualification.
⚠ The King James has a word here that no longer exists, and it coined it alone. The KJV prints ‘or any evilfavouredness’ — a single compound noun meaning ill-looking or badly-formed, ordinary enough in 1611 and now unreadable. ⭐ The Geneva of 1599, which the King James translators had open in front of them, does not have the compound: it reads ‘or any evil favored thing’, an adjective doing ordinary work. So the dead word is the King James’s own contribution, not something it inherited. What happened to it afterwards is the ordinary fate of English: it was not corrupted, it simply fell out of use, and a reader today either skips it or guesses. The ASV of 1901 tightens to ‘or anything evil’, which is what the Hebrew says; the Douay reads ‘or any fault’, and the RV 1909 «ó alguna cosa mala». The NIV pairs ‘defect or flaw’. It is kept flat here, because the Hebrew is flat: a technical term, then a shrug — or anything bad.
The first case the court gets is astral worship, and the accused may be a woman. The Hebrew says ish o ishah twice in four verses, and then a third time in the sentence of execution, which is not how this book usually writes. The specificity is the point: the procedure that follows is being stated for a defendant the reader might have assumed was outside it.
★★ The most loaded three words in the paragraph are the last three of v3. Asher lo tzivviti — which I did not command. Searched consonantally, that phrase stands in five verses of the Hebrew Bible, and two of the five attach a pronoun (Deuteronomy 18:20, which I did not command him; Jeremiah 32:35, which I did not command them). The company it keeps is the striking part. Besides this verse and the false prophet of the next chapter, every remaining occurrence is Jeremiah, and every one of them is child sacrifice — the high places of Topheth in the valley of Ben-hinnom (Jeremiah 7:31, not yet on these pages), the high places of Baal (Jeremiah 19:5, already on these pages: which I did not command, and did not speak, and it did not come up upon my heart), and the same valley again (Jeremiah 32:35). ⚠ The phrase is doing something careful in all five: it does not say the practice is ineffective or that the gods are not there, it says the order did not come from me. That is a narrower claim than the shelf's paraphrases usually carry, and it is the claim the Hebrew makes.
The astral cult is named, not implied — and the thirteen witnesses split three ways over the metaphor. Sun, moon, and tzeva ha-shamayim, the host of the heavens: a military noun, the sky as a mustered army. Four keep ‘host’ — KJV, ASV, Geneva and Douay, the four oldest English versions on the shelf. Six make the army explicit: the NWT 1984 and its 2013 revision with ‘army of the heavens’, the TNM 1987 and 2019 with «ejército de los cielos», and the RV 1909 and RV60 with «ejército del cielo». Three dissolve it into plain astronomy — the NIV and TLB to ‘stars’, the NVI to «estrellas». Astronomy is not the issue; enlistment is, and a third of the shelf reads the enlistment out.
⚠ And one version does here exactly what this note says the Hebrew refuses to do. Where the RV 1909 renders the clause «lo cual yo no he mandado», which I have not commanded, the RV60 that revised it prints «lo cual yo he prohibido» — which I have FORBIDDEN. That is a different and much stronger claim, and the Hebrew does not make it: the whole force of asher lo tzivviti is the narrower one. A revision is its own witness, and this is a clear case of one tightening a sentence past its source.
★ And before anyone is touched, there is an evidentiary standard. Ve-darashta heitev — you shall inquire thoroughly — and then a triple test the verse spells out rather than assumes: emet (true), nakhon (established), ha-davar (the thing itself). Only then does v5 move. The order of operations is the law's own, and it is the reason the next note exists.
★★ This is the verse behind one of the most-quoted procedural rules in the Bible, and it is worth being exact about which verse gets quoted. The half that recurs is the second one, o shelosha edim, ‘or three witnesses’, which stands in two verses of the Hebrew Bible — here, where it governs a death sentence, and Deuteronomy 19:15 (already on these pages), where the rule is generalised to every charge and every sin. ⚠ The first half is not shared, and calling the whole thing ‘the formula’ hides that. This verse writes shnayim edim, the absolute form, which stands in one verse of the Hebrew Bible; and 19:15 writes the construct shnei edim, which likewise stands in one verse of the Hebrew Bible. The rule is stated twice; the wording never is. ⚠ When Matthew 18:16 (already on these pages) quotes it, the wording it reproduces is 19:15's, not this verse's: on the mouth of two or three witnesses every matter may stand. This chapter supplies the rule; the next occurrence supplies the sentence everybody knows.
What the rule actually does is make conviction harder, and it says so twice. The verse states the threshold positively and then negatively in the same breath — two or three will convict; one will not. A single testimony is not weighed, discounted or treated as a starting point. It is excluded.
★★ Then v7 adds the requirement that has no parallel in the chapter and, in this exact form, no parallel in the Bible. Yad ha-edim tihyeh bo va-rishonah — the hand of the witnesses shall be on him first. The phrase yad ha-edim stands in one verse of the Hebrew Bible, this one. The man who testified must be the man who begins the killing, in front of everybody, before the crowd is allowed to join. ⚠ It is easy to read this as extra cruelty and it is closer to the opposite: it removes the anonymity that makes false testimony cheap. A witness who would lie to a court and then go home is required instead to do the thing himself, first, in daylight.
⚠ The Hebrew has ONE hand and most of the shelf has two. Yad is singular here and singular again for ‘the hand of all the people’ — a collective, not an anatomical count. The ASV keeps the singular exactly (‘The hand of the witnesses… and afterward the hand of all the people’); the KJV, the Geneva and the Douay all pluralise to ‘hands’, and the TLB drops the image for ‘throw the first stones’. The RV 1909 and RV60 both keep «la mano», singular, and are tighter here than the English tradition. Kept singular.
★ And this is the procedure a much later scene is standing on. At John 8:7 (already on these pages) the demand is that whoever is without sin cast the first stone — which in a court running on this verse is not a poetic flourish but a job description. The first stone belongs to the witness. ⚠ That is what the sentence does with the law; it is not a claim that the passage is quoting this verse, which it never names.
Closing formula. U-vi'arta ha-ra, burn out the evil, arrives here for the second time in the book and returns at v12. The clause stands in nine verses of the Hebrew Bible, all nine in Deuteronomy — first at 13:6, twice in this chapter, then 19:19, 21:21, three times in chapter 22, and 24:7. Seven of the nine burn the evil from your midst; two burn it from Israel, and one of those two is v12 below.
★★ The word for a case a village court cannot handle is the word for a miracle. Ki yippale mimmekha davar — the root is pala, and the form in this verse, yippale, stands in eight verses of the Hebrew Bible. ⚠ The eight are that one form, not the word-family: the root’s three consonants stand in eighty-six verses of the Hebrew Bible, a great many of them the niphla’ot, the wonders God is said to do. Three of them are already on these pages and they are not legal at all: Genesis 18:14, Is anything too wondrous for Jehovah?, spoken over Sarah's laughter; Leviticus 27:2 and Numbers 6:2, where a person makes a special vow — sets it apart, lifts it out of the ordinary. Jeremiah then throws Genesis's question back twice (Jeremiah 32:17, 27, not yet on these pages), Amnon finds a thing impossible (2 Samuel 13:2), and Zechariah 8:6 asks whether what is wonderful in the eyes of a remnant is also wonderful in God's.
So the Hebrew is not saying the case is difficult. It is saying the case is extraordinary — out of the ordinary run, beyond the local bench's reach, the same way a vow can be lifted out of the ordinary or an act can be lifted beyond what people do. Every English version on the shelf flattens it to hardness (‘too hard for thee’, KJV, ASV, Geneva), which is readable and loses the family resemblance; the NWT 1984 is the one witness that reaches for the root's own register with ‘too extraordinary for you’. Rendered too wondrous here, so that a reader who met the word at Sarah's tent recognises it at the courthouse door.
⚠ Three pairs, and the shelf cannot agree what the third one is. Bein dam le-dam (blood and blood), bein din le-din (claim and claim), u-vein nega la-nega — and nega is the word Leviticus 13 uses for whatever the priest is examining on a person's skin, before any diagnosis. So the third category is genuinely ambiguous, and the versions divide along it. The Douay, following the Latin, prints ‘leprosy and leprosy’ — a medical case. The Geneva has ‘plague and plague’. The KJV and ASV keep the neutral ‘stroke and stroke’, which can be read either way. The NIV resolves it the other direction entirely, as ‘assaults’, and the RV60 as a kind of wound. The RV 1909 keeps «llaga y llaga», a sore. ⚠ These are two different courts: one is deciding whether a man is contagious, the other whether a man was struck. The Hebrew does not choose, and neither does this translation — stroke holds both, which is exactly the ambiguity the local bench is being told it may not have to resolve alone.
And the court is a joint one. Priests and a judge — not a priest acting alone and not a magistrate acting alone. Ha-shofet asher yihyeh ba-yamim ha-hem, ‘the judge who is in those days’, is a phrase built for the future: the office outlives whoever holds it.
★★ The chapter's own bookend, and it is invisible to a search that does not know to look twice. Yamin u-smol, right or left, appears at v11 and again at v20. At v11 it is written defectively and at v20 plene, with a vav — and the two spellings are two different searches. Consonantally, the defective form stands in two verses of the Hebrew Bible: Deuteronomy 5:32 (5:28 in the Hebrew numbering this project follows) and this verse. The full spelling stands in twelve — including v20, Deuteronomy 2:27, Numbers 20:17, Joshua 1:7, 2 Kings 22:2 of Josiah, and Proverbs 4:27. Fourteen verses in all , and a reader searching for one of the two spellings finds only half the idiom.
What the bookend does is the substance of the chapter. At v11 the ordinary Israelite may not deviate right or left from the court's verdict. At v20 the king may not deviate right or left from the commandment. The same sentence is aimed at the bottom and at the top of the society, nine verses apart, and only one of them is ever cited — usually the king's. ⚠ Note also what each is bound TO: the citizen to a human ruling, the king to the law itself. Nobody in this chapter is told not to deviate from the king.
★ Zadon, and a penalty that is about the office, not the answer. Zadon is insolence — the root zid, to boil up, the same one behind the ‘high-handed’ sin that has no sacrifice at Numbers 15:30. The capital offence at v12 is not being wrong about the case. It is refusing the ruling with a raised hand once it has been given. ⚠ Every English witness reaches for the same Latin-derived word, ‘presumptuously’ (KJV, ASV, Geneva), which has drifted toward mere over-confidence; the NWT 1984 writes it out as behaving ‘with presumptuousness’, and the Douay chooses ‘proud’. Insolence is used here because the word is about defiance aimed at somebody, not about an inflated opinion of oneself.
And v13 states the purpose out loud: all the people shall hear, and fear. The execution is addressed to the audience, not the offender — a formula this book will use again at 21:21 over a rebellious son.
★★ The request is quoted before it is made, in the words Israel will actually use. Ke-khol ha-goyim asher sevivotai, like all the nations around me, stands in four verses of the Hebrew Bible. This is the first. Two of the remaining three are the elders at Ramah demanding a king of Samuel — appoint for us a king to judge us, like all the nations, and then again, after the warning, we too shall be like all the nations (1 Samuel 8:5, 8:20, not yet on these pages). The fourth is Moab sneering that the house of Judah is like all the nations (Ezekiel 25:8). ⚠ So the law does not describe the monarchy in neutral constitutional language. It puts the demand in the people's own mouth, in advance, in the phrasing the book of Samuel will report as the thing that displeased both Samuel and God.
★ And then the grammar makes the crux. Som tasim aleikha melekh — an infinitive absolute doubled onto its own verb, Hebrew's way of leaning on a word. The doubling stands in one verse of the Hebrew Bible, this one. Read as an imperative it says you shall certainly appoint a king; read as the apodosis of the ‘if you say’ that opened v14, it says then the king you appoint must be this kind. Jewish and Christian readers have divided on precisely this for two thousand years — whether the monarchy is a positive commandment or a concession regulated after the fact — and the Hebrew genuinely supports both. This translation prints the emphasis (you shall surely set) and leaves the question where the text leaves it.
⚠ The shelf takes sides, and mostly toward command. The KJV renders it ‘Thou shalt in any wise set him king over thee’ and the ASV ‘thou shalt surely set him king over thee’, both carrying the doubling. The Geneva makes the conditional visible instead — ‘Then thou shalt make him King over thee’ — which is the reading that treats the king as a concession, and it is the only English witness on the shelf whose sentence structure says so. The Douay drops the doubling altogether. In Spanish the RV 1909 has «Sin duda pondrás» and the RV60 «ciertamente pondrás», both emphatic. ⭐ The Geneva's small structural choice is the most interesting thing the shelf does in this chapter, and it is the kind of decision a reader would never see without the parallel column.
Two limits, and the second is a boundary of belonging. The king is Jehovah's choice, and he must be mi-qerev acheikha, from among your brothers — not a nokhri, a foreign man. ⚠ Nokhri is not the ger whom this book keeps commanding you to feed and love; the ger lives among you and is protected, the nokhri belongs elsewhere. The verse is about who may hold power, and the same book that opens the harvest to the resident outsider closes the throne to the foreign one.
Three prohibitions, and each of them removes a thing kings exist for. The verb is the same all three times: lo yarbeh lo, he shall not multiply for himself. The exact phrase stands in two verses of the Hebrew Bible, v16 and v17 — it exists nowhere else. A chariot corps, a diplomatic marriage network, and a treasury are not incidental royal luxuries; in the ancient Near East they are the instruments of statecraft. The law leaves the office and takes away its usual means.
★ The horses come with a direction, and the direction is the whole point. Not merely do not build cavalry but do not send the people back to Egypt to get it. Egypt was the horse market of the region, and this book's entire argument is a one-way journey out of it. A standing army bought from Egypt would be paid for by a return traffic in people — and that is the sentence the law refuses.
⚠⚠ And then the verse quotes God saying something no chapter of the Torah records. Va-YHVH amar lakhem, lo tosifun lashuv ba-derekh ha-zeh od — for Jehovah has said to you, ‘You shall not go back that way again.’ There is no such verse. Searched consonantally, lo tosifun stands in three verses of the Hebrew Bible — this one, Joseph's brothers reporting that they may not see his face again (Genesis 44:23, already on these pages), and Pharaoh being told the thunder will stop (Exodus 9:28, already on these pages) — and neither of the other two is this saying. The nearest thing in the whole Bible is Moses at the sea: the Egyptians whom you have seen today, you shall not see them again, ever (Exodus 14:13, already on these pages) — a different verb form, and a promise about seeing rather than a command about going. ⚠ This translation does not patch the gap. The honest description is that the law cites a divine word the Torah does not preserve, which is a thing the Torah does elsewhere too, and the shelf prints the citation without comment in all thirteen versions. ⭐ Read forward, it also sits oddly beside 28:68 (not yet on these pages), where going back to Egypt in ships is named as the final curse — the same road, once as a prohibition and once as a punishment.
The wives clause gives its own reason, and it is not about the wives. Ve-lo yasur levavo — so that his heart does not turn aside, the same verb sur that v11 and v20 use of turning right or left. Marriage alliances import the gods of the allies; that is the stated danger, and the book has been arguing about it since chapter 7. ⚠ Every one of these three is a portrait of Solomon in advance — the horse trade with Egypt, the seven hundred wives, the silver made as common as stones (1 Kings 10–11, not yet on these pages). Whether that is prophecy or hindsight is a genuinely open question of composition, and this page does not vote on it; what is not in doubt is that a later editor and a later reader could both see the fit.
★★ This is the verse the book is named after, and the name comes from a translation, not from the Hebrew. The king must write out for himself et mishneh ha-torah ha-zot. Mishneh is a duplicate — a second copy of a thing, from the root for ‘two’ — so the plain sense is that the king makes his own transcript of the instruction the priests keep. The construct phrase mishneh ha-torah stands in one verse of the Hebrew Bible, this one; without the article, mishneh torat stands in one more, Joshua 8:32 (not yet on these pages), where Joshua writes a copy of Moses' instruction on stones.
★★ The Greek read those two words the other way, and the reading became a title. The Septuagint renders the phrase τò δευτερονóμιον τοûτο — deuteronomion, ‘this second law’ — the Latin followed it with Deuteronomium, and the whole book has carried that word as its name in Greek, Latin and English ever since. In Hebrew the book is called Devarim, ‘words’, from its opening line. ⭐ The shelf preserves the evidence in plain sight, in a public-domain version anyone can check: the Douay-Rheims, translating the Vulgate, prints at this verse ‘he shall copy out to himself the Deuteronomy of this law in a volume’ — the Latin word carried straight into English, in the one place the name was born. ⚠ A copy and a second law are not the same claim: the first says the king writes out what already exists, the second implies a repetition or a supplement. The book is named for the reading the Hebrew does not require.
The rest of the shelf lands on ‘copy’, with one telling exception. The KJV and ASV both write ‘a copy of this law in a book’; the RV 1909 has «un traslado de esta ley», a transcript, which is the tightest word on either shelf. The Geneva of 1599 splits the difference with ‘this law repeated in a book’ — visibly pulled toward the Greek title even while its neighbours are not. The NIV and NWT 1984 both say copy.
★ What the king is actually ordered to do is the surprise. Not to enforce the law, not to expound it, not to be its final court — the previous paragraph already gave that to the priests and the judge. He is ordered to copy it out by hand and then read it every day of his life, and the stated purpose is instructional: so that he may learn to fear Jehovah his God. ⚠ He is also the only individual in the Torah told to make his own copy of the instruction; the nearest neighbours are public, not personal — words written on doorposts (6:9), and the whole instruction written on plastered stones at Ebal (27:2–8, not yet on these pages).
★★ And the last clause is the clause that makes the office small. Le-vilti rum levavo me-echav — that his heart not be lifted above his brothers. The phrase rum levavo stands in one verse of the Hebrew Bible, this one. ⚠ Twice in seven verses the king is put back among his brothers: he is taken from among your brothers at v15 and forbidden to rise above his brothers here. Between those two clauses stands the entire law of the monarchy — and the only thing it hands him is a book to copy.
Echoes paid. Mum — the blemish that disqualified the firstborn animal at 15:21, back at v1 with its phrase loosened from the beast and turned on a person. The one chosen place of chapter 12, which arrives here as a court of appeal rather than an altar — the first non-cultic thing centralisation is made to do. Shofet, the judge instituted for the towns at 16:18, now sitting on the higher bench at v9. Burn out the evil, from 13:6, twice here. The astral cult that 4:19 warned against by name, now a capital charge with a procedure attached. And right or left, last heard at Deuteronomy 5:32.
Echoes planted. Asher lo tzivviti, ‘which I did not command’, whose very next occurrence is 18:20 — one chapter on, of a prophet who speaks a word in Jehovah's name that Jehovah did not give him. The two-or-three-witnesses rule, which 19:15 will lift out of capital cases and apply to every charge, and which is the form the New Testament quotes. Yippale again in the mouth of Jeremiah, asking whether anything is too wondrous for the God who made heaven and earth. The formula all the people shall hear and fear, back at 21:21. And the king himself, who does not appear again in this book until 28:36 — where he goes into exile with the people who asked for him.
★★ The running grammatical-number study finds a seam here, and it falls on the one sentence in the chapter that is quoting somebody. Chapter 14 located the singular/plural seam between Deuteronomy's own voice and a source it was reworking; chapter 15 and chapter 16 each predicted and found no seam in a chapter drawing on singular sources. Deuteronomy 17 addresses its hearer in the singular in nineteen of its twenty verses. The exception is v16, which switches to the plural for the length of a quotation and then switches back: va-YHVH amar lakhem, Jehovah has said to you (pl), lo tosifun lashuv, you (pl) shall not go back. The plural markers are the two words inside the citation and nothing else in the chapter carries one — so the seam and the unrecorded saying discussed at n17-16 are the same seam.
⚠ A trap no consonantal search can see. Verse 5's u-sqaltam and v19's la’asotam both end in the three letters that spell a plural -tem, and both are singulars carrying a ‘them’ object suffix — you (sg) shall stone them, and to do them. Only the vowel separates the two.
★ The archive settled five things here that reading could not. Mishneh ha-torah in one verse — the phrase that named the book occurs once in the Bible. Yad ha-edim, som tasim and rum levavo each in one verse, all three in this chapter. Lo yarbeh lo in two, both of them here. And ke-khol ha-goyim in four, two of which are Israel asking Samuel for a king in this verse's own words. ⚠ Two counts needed care rather than counting: asher lo tzivviti returns five verses of which two carry a pronoun suffix, and yamin u-smol is two searches, not one — the defective spelling returns two verses and the plene twelve, and this chapter uses both.
Library. Six new dictionary terms in both languages — mishneh torah, ed, melekh, nokhri, sus and riv. Four existing entries extended rather than duplicated — mum, pala, nega and tzava. Zadon gained a Spanish twin for the first time, so the number of English terms with no Spanish entry moves down rather than up. No new encyclopedia entries: this chapter names no person and no place the library did not already carry — Egypt is its only proper noun besides Israel. ⚠ VIDEO_QUEUE was checked per the standing rule; nothing queued belongs here.
⚠ Kings have already been on the page. The bare word melekh stands in seventeen verses of Deuteronomy, thirteen of them before this chapter — Sihon, Og, Arad, Pharaoh — and suffixed forms add two more, their kings at 7:24 and your king at 28:36. What is true is the narrower thing: not one of the thirteen is a king of Israel.
Next installment in this book: Deuteronomy 18 — which finishes the survey of offices this chapter began. It settles what the Levite lives on, now that he has no share and no inheritance and the altar is a day's walk away; it lists the practices of the nations Israel is to replace, one of the Bible's longest catalogues of divination; and then it promises a prophet like Moses, raised up from among your brothers, whose words carry the weight the king's copy of the law does not. It also pays this chapter's sharpest phrase: the false prophet of 18:20 speaks a word which I did not command him — and dies for it, under a rule this chapter has just written.