Numbers 23 — The Mister Translation
and from the hills I behold him.
Look — a people that dwells alone,
and does not reckon itself among the nations.note
y desde los collados lo contemplo.
Mira — un pueblo que habita solo,
y que no se cuenta entre las naciones.
or numbered the fourth part of Israel?
Let me die the death of the upright,
and let my end be like his!note
o ha numerado la cuarta parte de Israel?
¡Muera yo la muerte de los rectos,
y sea mi fin como el suyo!
Levántate, Balac, y oye;
préstame oído, hijo de Zipor.
nor a son of man, that he should relent.
Has he said, and will he not do it?
Or spoken, and will he not carry it through?note
ni hijo de hombre, para que se arrepienta.
¿Lo ha dicho, y no lo hará?
¿O lo ha hablado, y no lo llevará a cabo?
and he has blessed, and I cannot turn it back.note
y él ha bendecido, y yo no puedo revocarlo.
nor seen trouble in Israel.
Jehovah his God is with him,
and the shout of a king is in him.note
ni ha visto fatiga en Israel.
Jehová su Dios está con él,
y en él está la aclamación de un rey.
suyos son los cuernos alzados del toro salvaje.
and no divination in Israel.
At this time it is said of Jacob and of Israel:
What has God done!note
ni adivinación en Israel.
A este tiempo se dice de Jacob y de Israel:
¡Lo que Dios ha hecho!
and lifts itself up like a lion.
He will not lie down until he eats prey
and drinks the blood of the slain.note
y como león se yergue.
No se echará hasta que coma presa
y beba la sangre de los caídos.
Numbers 23:1-6 — Wayyiqqar — the verb that says God CHANCED upon him, and a bare height that belongs to Isaiah and Jeremiah
⭐ Four times in this chapter the narrator says God did not come to Balaam so much as HAPPEN upon him. The verb at vv3, 4, 15 and 16 is the niphal of qarah, the ordinary Hebrew root for something falling out by accident — the root behind Ruth 2:3, where Ruth’s ‘hap was to light on’ the field of Boaz. Searched across the archived Masoretic text, wayyiqqar Elohim stands in one verse and wayyiqqar Jehovah in one, and both of them are here (vv4, 16). The Torah has a whole vocabulary for God arriving on purpose — he APPEARS to Abraham, he CALLS to Moses out of the bush — and it is pointedly not used of the diviner. ⚠ Outside this chapter the stem is used of God meeting anyone in two verses, and they are one speech: Exodus 3:18, where Moses is told what to say to Pharaoh, and Exodus 5:3, where he and Aaron say it — the God of the Hebrews has chanced upon us. Even there it is on the lips of people explaining themselves to a foreign king.
The whole shelf smooths it to ‘met’. KJV and ASV ‘God met Balaam’, Geneva the same, Douay ‘God met him’, RV 1909 and RV60 both «vino Dios al encuentro». NIV adds a preposition — ‘met with’ — and the NWT 1984 is the only one that reaches for something strange, but it reaches for a telephone (‘got in touch’) rather than for an accident. Mister prints ‘chanced upon’, and this is the reason: the chapter is about a professional trying to ARRANGE an encounter, and the narrator has chosen the one verb that says encounters with this God are not arranged.
⚠ And Balaam picks the word up. At v15 he tells Balak ‘I will go to be met over there’ — ikkareh koh, the same stem, now in the first person and pointed at a specific spot on a hill. A man who has been chanced upon twice announces that he is going to go and be chanced upon again.
⭐ ‘A bare height’ (v3) is a word that otherwise belongs to two prophets. Shephi stands in nine verses of the Hebrew Bible; eight are in Isaiah and Jeremiah, always plural, and this is the only singular and the only one outside them. Jeremiah 7:29 puts both of this chapter’s opening moves into one line — LIFT UP a lament on the BARE HEIGHTS — using the same verb that takes up an oracle at v7 and the same noun that Balaam walks off to. ⚠ The shelf is genuinely at sea here: ASV ‘a bare height’, NIV ‘a barren height’, RV60 «un monte descubierto», NVI «una loma desolada» — but KJV reads ‘an high place’, which is the wrong kind of high place (a bamah is a sanctuary, and Balak has just walked him DOWN off one), while Geneva and RV 1909 both take it to mean he went alone («se fué solo»), and the Douay drops the clause entirely.
Seven altars, seven bulls, seven rams — and it happens three times (vv1-2, 14, 29-30), so twenty-one of each animal before the chapter is over. ⚠ Watch who does the killing. V2 has both men offering; v14 and v30 have Balak alone at the altar while his prophet walks away. The king is doing the priestly work in a rite designed by a foreigner to compel a God he does not worship.
‘And Jehovah put a word in Balaam’s mouth’ (v5) is the muzzle of Numbers 22:35 arriving. Balaam had already told Balak at 22:38 that he could only speak what was put in his mouth. This is the first of the two times in this chapter it is done to him.
Numbers 23:7-10 — The first oracle: four curse-verbs, a people that dwells alone, and the fourth part of a camp
‘He took up his oracle.’ The noun is mashal, the proverb-word — a saying that governs by likeness — and the shelf hears the register differently: KJV, ASV, Geneva and RV60 all read ‘parable’ / «parábola», Douay ‘parable’, NIV ‘message’, the NWT 1984 ‘proverbial utterance’. Mister prints ‘oracle’ because what follows is formal verse delivered as a verdict; the likeness-sense is in the dictionary entry, where Numbers 21:27 already used the same root for a taunt-song.
⭐ The chapter opens with FOUR different words for cursing in two verses, and the exchange between them is the plot. At v7 Balaam quotes Balak’s commission back to him in Balak’s own opening vocabulary — arah, curse, the verb of 22:6, and zo’amah, denounce. At v8 he answers, and he answers only one of them: he keeps za’am and swaps arar for qabab — exactly the substitution he made when he relayed the request to God at 22:11. ⚠ And it sticks. After v7, arar does not appear again in this chapter; every remaining demand — vv11, 13, 25, 27 — is Balak using Balaam’s verb. The king has been talked into the prophet’s vocabulary without either of them remarking on it.
⭐ Za’am is a stranger here. Searched consonantally in both its spellings across the whole archived text, the verb occurs in the Torah in exactly two verses — vv7 and 8 of this chapter. Everywhere else it belongs to Isaiah, Jeremiah, Ezekiel, Nahum, Zephaniah, Zechariah, Malachi, Hosea, Habakkuk, Daniel, Lamentations, the Psalms and Proverbs. It is a prophetic word, and the one time the Torah uses it, it is in the mouth of a foreign prophet.
⭐ ‘A people that dwells alone’ (v9) — and the two shelves disagree about whether that is a good thing. The exact form le-vadad stands in three verses of the Hebrew Bible: this one, Micah 7:14 and Psalm 4:9. The English shelf hears isolation — KJV ‘dwell alone’, ASV ‘dwelleth alone’, Geneva ‘by themselves’, NIV ‘live apart’. ⚠ The whole Spanish shelf hears SAFETY instead: RV 1909 and RV60 both «habitará confiado», a people dwelling CONFIDENT. Neither is a mistake — Deuteronomy 33:28 has Israel dwelling badad in safety, and Lamentations 1:1 has a city sitting badad in ruins. The word says only that they are by themselves; whether that is security or exposure is left to the reader, and two shelves in two languages have decided it in opposite directions.
⭐ ‘The fourth part of Israel’ (v10), and where Balaam is standing. Rova is a rare noun built on the number four, and the phrase rova Yisrael stands in exactly one verse of the Bible — this one. Most of the shelf prints the arithmetic (KJV, Geneva, ASV, RV 1909, RV60 «la cuarta parte»), the Douay reads ‘the stock’, and the sense is genuinely disputed. ⭐ But there is a reading the versions do not take and the book itself supplies: Numbers 2 arranged this camp on four sides, three tribes to a side. From the top of a hill overlooking it, ‘the fourth part of Israel’ is not a fraction — it is one of the four blocks a man can actually see.
‘Let me die the death of the upright’ is the most-quoted line Balaam ever says, and it is a WISH. The Hebrew is a jussive: let it happen. Nothing in the sentence claims it will, and the Bible records elsewhere how he actually died — Numbers 31:8, in a battle, among the enemy.
Numbers 23:11-17 — ‘You will see only the EDGE of him’ — a king who thinks the problem is the view
⭐ Balak’s diagnosis is that his prophet saw too much, and the word he uses has now stood in three consecutive scenes. At 22:36 the king came out to the qetzeh, the EDGE, of his own border to collect the man; at 22:41 he showed him the qetzeh of the people; and here at v13 he proposes to move him somewhere he will see only the edge and not the whole. ⚠ The theory is that a curse is a matter of aim. Balaam has just told him it is a matter of dictation.
The Field of Zophim means the field of the WATCHERS — lookouts, from the verb tsaphah, to keep watch — which is a peculiarly apt address for the second attempt, and no version on either shelf translates it (all of them transliterate, as this one does). It sits on Pisgah, the ridge Numbers 21:20 already put on the itinerary and from which Moses will eventually be shown the land he cannot enter.
‘You have altogether blessed them’ (v11) is a doubled verb — berakhta varekh, bless-you-have-blessed — and Balak will do it again at v25 with both verbs at once. This translation keeps the doubling rather than flattening it to an adverb, on the same principle as the doubled ‘send and send’ at 22:37.
⚠ Balak’s question at v17 is not the one he asked at v11. The first time he demanded to know what Balaam had DONE to him. The second time, before the oracle has even started, he asks: what has Jehovah spoken? He has not stopped trying to buy a curse — but he has started using the name, and asking about the source rather than the servant.
Numbers 23:18-24 — ‘God is not a man’, a wild ox that became a unicorn, and no divination in Jacob — said by a diviner
⭐⭐ ‘Nor a son of man, that he should relent’ (v19) — and the stem Balaam uses to deny it is used twice elsewhere to affirm it. The form is yitnecham, the reflexive of nacham, and searched across the whole archived Hebrew text it stands in exactly three verses: this one, Deuteronomy 32:36 and Psalm 135:14. ⚠ In BOTH of the others the claim is the opposite — Jehovah will judge his people, and concerning his servants he WILL relent. The identical stem, in the identical stem-pattern, three times in the Bible, once saying God does not do this and twice saying he does.
⭐ And the Bible sets its strongest statement of divine unchangeability inside its clearest story of divine change. 1 Samuel 15:29 makes Balaam’s argument almost word for word — he is not a man, that he should relent — and it stands in a chapter that says twice, at 15:11 and again at 15:35, that Jehovah relented over making Saul king. Same book, same chapter, eighteen verses apart. The text does not resolve it, and this translation does not either; what it will not do is quietly render the two passages with different English words to hide the collision.
⚠ ‘Relent’, not ‘repent’. The older shelf prints ‘repent’ (KJV, ASV, Geneva, and both RV 1909 and RV60 «se arrepienta»); the NIV has ‘change his mind’; the Douay, from the Latin, ‘be changed’. Modern English ‘repent’ implies wrongdoing, which is not in the Hebrew, and this project has rendered the root ‘relent’ since Exodus 32:14.
⚠ Verse 20 has a hole in it, and every version fills it differently. The Hebrew is hinneh barekh laqachti — ‘look, to bless I have received’ — and it never says WHAT he received. KJV, ASV and Geneva all supply ‘commandment’, the RV60 «orden», the NIV ‘a command’; the RV 1909 supplies nothing and has him receiving the blessing itself. ⚠ The Douay is the outlier and turns the verb passive — ‘I was brought to bless’ — which is a different claim about who is doing what to whom. Mister prints ‘a charge’ and says here that the noun is supplied, because the verb is active and first-person and the sentence will not stand without an object.
⚠ Verse 21 is the hardest line in the chapter and the shelf splits THREE ways, not two. The two nouns are aven and amal, and there is no expressed subject for either verb. (a) A moral reading: KJV and ASV ‘iniquity’ and ‘perverseness’, Geneva ‘iniquity’ and ‘transgression’, RV 1909 and RV60 «iniquidad» and «perversidad» — God is declining to look at Israel’s sin. (b) A circumstantial reading: NIV ‘misfortune’ and ‘misery’ — nothing bad is happening TO Israel, which is a different claim entirely and just as defensible, since amal is a trouble-word. (c) ⭐ And an idolatry reading found only in the Douay, following the Vulgate: ‘There is no idol in Jacob, neither is there an image god to be seen in Israel’ — because aven also means a nothingness, an empty thing, and hence an idol (it is the word behind Hosea’s renaming of Bethel as Beth-aven). Mister prints ‘iniquity’ and ‘trouble’ and flags that all three are live; the note is the honest place for a verse this contested.
⭐ ‘The shout of a king’ (v21) is a technical noise. Teru’ah in the construct stands in exactly four verses of the Hebrew Bible: two of them are teru’at milchamah, a war-cry (Jeremiah 4:19; 49:2), one is the teru’at ha-simchah, the shout of joy at the second temple’s foundation (Ezra 3:13), and this one is the shout of a KING. ⚠ Numbers 10:5-7, already on these pages, gave the same noise a job: on the silver trumpets a teru’ah means break camp and march, and a plain sustained blast means assemble. Balaam is on a hill looking down at that camp.
⭐⭐ The wild ox of v22 is where the unicorn came from, and the fossil is visible on both shelves. Re’em is the aurochs, the wild cattle of the ancient Near East, hunted by Assyrian kings and extinct since the seventeenth century. The Greek Bible rendered it monokerōs, one-horn; the Vulgate followed; and the chain surfaces in English as KJV ‘the strength of an unicorn’ and Geneva ‘as an unicorn’, and in the Douay, straight off the Latin, as ‘the rhinoceros’. ⚠ The Spanish shelf preserves the same chain and then repairs it, which is the better evidence: RV 1909 «unicornio», and RV60, revising its own ancestor, «búfalo». The ASV had already printed ‘wild-ox’ in 1901, and NIV, NVI and the NWT 1984 all read a wild bovine. So the unicorn is not a KJV eccentricity; it is a translation chain four languages long, and two shelves show it being unwound at different dates.
⚠ The other half of v22 is genuinely uncertain. To’afot is a rare plural, read either as HORNS (the 1917 Jewish Publication Society version prints ‘the lofty horns’) or as lofty STRENGTH (KJV, ASV). Mister prints ‘the soaring horns’ and says here that it is a guess between two. In the Torah the wild ox appears three times, all of them in poetry — here, Numbers 24:8 (now on these pages) and Deuteronomy 33:17 (not yet) — and two of the three are Balaam’s.
⭐⭐ ‘No omen in Jacob, no divination in Israel’ (v23), said by a man whose trade is both. The two nouns are nachash, omen-reading — the word Joseph’s steward used of the silver cup — and qesem, divination, which is the FEE the messengers were carrying in their hands at 22:7 and the practice Deuteronomy 18:10 forbids outright. Joshua 13:22 calls Balaam simply ha-qosem, the diviner. He is standing beside his third set of altars, in the middle of a paid attempt to read a verdict out of them, saying there is no such thing in Israel.
⭐ And nachash is the same three consonants as the serpent two chapters ago, and as the metal it was made of. Numbers 21:9 has nechash nechoshet, a serpent of bronze. A consonantal search for the divination forms here returns bronze fetters and bronze temple-offerings by the dozen — which proves the collision rather than the etymology, and the etymology has been argued over for a very long time without being settled. Three unrelated things in Numbers spelled almost identically: a snake, a metal, and the reading of omens.
⚠ One preposition decides what verse 23 means, and the shelf is split down the middle. Hebrew be- can be ‘in’ or ‘against’. ‘There is no omen IN Jacob’ says Israel keeps no diviners; ‘no omen AGAINST Jacob’ says no spell can touch them. KJV and NIV and RV60 («contra Jacob») and the NWT 1984 read AGAINST; ASV (‘with Jacob’), Geneva, the Douay and RV 1909 («en Jacob») read IN. Mister prints ‘in’, and the reason is internal rather than traditional: verse 21, two lines earlier, uses the identical preposition on the identical name — be-Ya’aqov — where it can only mean ‘in’, since nobody has beheld iniquity AGAINST Jacob. Consistency inside one oracle is a better guide than either half of the shelf.
⭐ Verse 24 has two different lions and most versions print one. Lavi is a lioness; ari is a lion. KJV flattens the pair into sizes — ‘a great lion’, ‘a young lion’ — Geneva does the same, and the entire Spanish shelf prints «león» twice (RV 1909, RV60). ⚠ Two versions print the female first and the male second, which is what the Hebrew does: the ASV (‘as a lioness… as a lion’) and, from the Latin, the Douay. Mister follows them. ⭐ The pair is not new: Genesis 49:9 crouches Judah down as an aryeh and a lavi in one line — the same two nouns, in the blessing of Jacob on his sons. A Moabite hireling is describing Israel in the vocabulary Israel’s own ancestor used, and at Numbers 24:9 (now on these pages) he quotes the line almost exactly.
Numbers 23:25-30 — Peor, the Jeshimon, and a chapter that stops in the middle of a sacrifice
‘Neither hex him at all, nor bless him at all’ (v25) is a king lowering his demand to nothing. Both halves are doubled infinitives, matching the doubled ‘altogether blessed’ of v11. Balak hired a curse, has been given two blessings, and now asks only for silence — and does not get that either, because he immediately proposes a third mountain.
⚠ The third site is Peor, and the name is a fuse. Nothing has happened at Peor yet; it is simply a summit with a view. Two chapters later it is Baal-peor, the place where Israel does to itself what Balaam was hired and unable to do to it — and Numbers 22:4 has already put Midian in the room. The chapter mentions the mountain in a travel note and moves on.
⭐ ‘The Jeshimon’ (v28) means the wasteland, and the shelf cannot agree whether that is a description or an address. Four versions keep it as a NAME — KJV and Geneva ‘Jeshimon’, RV 1909 «Jesimón», and the NWT 1984. Four translate it — ASV ‘the desert’, the Douay ‘the wilderness’, NIV ‘the wasteland’, and RV60 «el desierto». ⚠ The split runs along the same seam as the wild ox two verses earlier: the 1909 Reina-Valera keeps the name and its own 1960 revision replaces it, exactly as «unicornio» became «búfalo». The NVI declines to choose and prints both («el desierto de Jesimón»). Mister transliterates and puts the meaning here, which is the same decision this translation made for Bamoth-baal at 22:41: on an itinerary, a name is doing the work of a name.
⭐ And then it stops. The last thing in the chapter is a bull and a ram going up on an altar, with no oracle attached — the setup for a third attempt that will not be answered until the next chapter, where Balaam gives up on omens altogether and simply looks at the camp. ⚠ There is not one Masoretic paragraph break in these thirty verses, not a setumah and not a petuchah. Numbers 22 had exactly one in forty-one; this chapter has none at all, so the scribes have run the two failed curses and the beginning of the third together as a single unbroken block of text.
Notes on this translation
Decisions. Hebrew and English agree on 30 verses. ⚠ The rendering to flag first is ‘chanced upon’ / ‘chance to meet’ for the niphal of qarah at vv3, 4, 15 and 16, where every one of the versions consulted prints some form of ‘met’. The reason is in the note: the Torah has a vocabulary for God arriving on purpose and does not use it here, and a chapter about a man trying to ARRANGE an encounter is the one place the difference earns its keep. ⚠ Three more departures are flagged where they occur. ‘In Jacob’, not ‘against Jacob’, at v23 — a preposition that splits the shelf evenly and decides what the verse claims; this translation follows v21’s identical construction rather than either tradition. ‘Lioness’ and ‘lion’ at v24, with the ASV and the Douay against a shelf that mostly prints two sizes of the same animal. And ‘the soaring horns’ at v22, where to’afot is genuinely uncertain and is said here to be a guess between horns and lofty strength. Elsewhere: qabab stays ‘hex’ as in Numbers 22, so the three-verb exchange stays visible; nacham stays ‘relent’, the project’s rendering since Exodus 32:14; mashal is ‘oracle’; and the Jeshimon is transliterated with its meaning in the note, on the same principle as Bamoth-baal. ⭐ There is not one Masoretic paragraph break in the whole chapter — no setumah, no petuchah. Numbers 22 had exactly one in forty-one verses; these thirty run without a scribal pause.
Library. Six new dictionary entries in both languages: shephi, the bare height that otherwise belongs entirely to Isaiah and Jeremiah; za’am, the third curse-verb, which enters the Torah in this chapter and nowhere else; badad, alone, which the two shelves read in opposite directions; rova, the fourth part; re’em, the wild ox the King James calls a unicorn; and lavi, the lioness. Amal gained its first Spanish edition. Six existing entries were rewritten — nacham, nachash, teruah, mashal, qesem and qabab, each of which this chapter gave something the entry could not have had before (the count of removed lines in the commit diff is what that claim rests on, not intention). Three new encyclopedia entries — the Field of Zophim, Peor and the Jeshimon, all three with atlas coordinates marked as approximate, since not one of them is certainly located — and Aram gained a Spanish edition and Pisgah a second reference.
Echoes paid — six. Numbers 22 planted this chapter as the one ‘where the muzzle of v35 works’; vv5 and 16 are the muzzle working, twice. Its qabab entry predicted that the curse-verb exchange would continue, and v8 is where Balak loses the argument about vocabulary without noticing. Its qetzeh, the EDGE — the border’s edge at 22:36 and the people’s edge at 22:41 — returns a third time at v13 as Balak’s theory of what went wrong. The qesem in the messengers’ hands at 22:7 is the word Balaam denies of Israel at v23. Numbers 21:9’s serpent of bronze supplies the three consonants that v23 uses for omen-reading. And Numbers 2’s four-sided camp is, quite possibly, what ‘the fourth part of Israel’ means when it is said by a man standing on a hill above it.
Patterns worth carrying forward. First, the seam that has now shown up in three consecutive chapters: the older half of the shelf and the newer half keep dividing at the same places, and a version’s own revision is a third witness rather than a footnote. The 1909 Reina-Valera prints «unicornio» at v22 and «Jesimón» at v28; its own 1960 revision replaces both. Second, and specific to Balaam: the chapter’s best lines are all denials by a man of his own trade — no omen in Jacob, no divination in Israel, and God is not the kind of being who can be talked round — said between two sets of seven altars built to talk him round. Third, a habit worth keeping as a method: three of this chapter’s findings came from counting a form across the whole Hebrew Bible rather than reading this chapter harder (shephi, za’am, yitnecham), and a fourth came from reading what a letter-search returned by MISTAKE — searching the divination forms of nachash returns bronze fetters and bronze offerings, which is the pun rather than a bad search.
Echoes planted. Numbers 24 (now on these pages), where Balaam gives up on omens entirely — 24:1 says he no longer went, as at the other times, to meet nechashim — and delivers a third and fourth oracle, quoting Genesis 49:9’s lion back almost word for word and adding a star out of Jacob; Peor, mentioned here as a summit with a view and by Numbers 25 the name of the worst thing Israel does to itself in this book; and Numbers 31:8 and 31:16 (not yet), which record how the man who wished for the death of the upright actually died, and what his advice is remembered to have been.
⚠ A note on order: Numbers stands on these pages at chapters 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, and now 34. Chapters 35–36 remain the open sequence.