Deuteronomy 20 — The Mister Translation
The survey of institutions has given the king almost nothing to do (17:16–17, already on these pages) and the judiciary everything; here it hands the army over to a PRIEST, alone, before a word is said to any commander. He does not bless the troops or offer a sacrifice — he argues with them, and the argument is theological rather than tactical: more horses and chariots than you have is not a reason to fear, because the God who is with you is the same one who brought you up out of Egypt. ⚠ This is not the only priestly address in the book, and the difference is worth stating precisely. Deuteronomy 27:9 (now on these pages) has ‘Moses and the priests, the Levites’ speak jointly to all Israel — keep silence and hear, O Israel. Here Moses is not even in the room: v2 gives the line to the priest, singular, addressing the army on his own authority.
★★ The reassurance is not generic — it is one phrase quoting one other verse. Lo tira mehem, you shall not fear them, stands in two verses of the Hebrew Bible: Deuteronomy 7:18 (already on these pages), where the same clause is followed by remember well what Jehovah your God did to Pharaoh and to all Egypt, and this one, where the reason is compressed into a single participle — who brought you up from the land of Egypt. Two verses, more than a dozen chapters apart, and both times the cure for a stronger enemy is the same memory.
⚠ Verse 3 stacks four separate verbs against fear, and the shelf keeps the count even where it does not keep the words. Al-yerakh levavchem (let your heart not turn soft), al-tira’u (do not fear), al-tachpezu (do not panic — a root that elsewhere means to flee in haste; the Passover is eaten be-chippazon, in haste, Exodus 12:11, already on these pages), al-ta’artzu (do not tremble, a rarer root, six verses in the whole Bible). The ASV keeps all four — ‘let not your heart faint; fear not, nor tremble, neither be ye affrighted’ — and the KJV keeps a near-identical four, ‘let not your hearts faint, fear not, and do not tremble, neither be ye terrified’; the NWT 1984 reads ‘do not let YOUR hearts be timid. Do not be afraid and run in panic or shudder’. ⚠ The Douay keeps the count but not the sense, adding a fifth idea the Hebrew does not have — ‘do not give back’, i.e. do not retreat — a natural gloss on panic that is nonetheless not one of the four verbs themselves.
⭐ The rare verb of verse 3 recurs once more, and it is Jeremiah comforting the losing side of a very different war. Yerakh levavchem, paired with tira’u exactly as here, stands in two verses of the Hebrew Bible: this one, and Jeremiah 51:46 (not yet on these pages), where the exiles in Babylon are told let not your heart be faint, and do not fear, at the report that is heard in the land, a rumour of chaos inside the empire that is about to fall. Deuteronomy uses the phrase to steady soldiers marching toward a battle; Jeremiah uses the identical pairing to steady captives waiting one out, on the winning side of history for once. The vocabulary of courage is portable between a war law and an exile oracle, centuries apart.
The priest has argued the theology; the officers now handle the roster, and they do it by asking not who is strong but who has something unfinished. A house not yet lived in, a vineyard not yet bearing usable fruit, a betrothal not yet a marriage — three men are sent home so that death in battle cannot hand what they started to someone else. ⭐ 1 Maccabees 3:56 (outside this project’s translated canon) shows the law being followed centuries later, by name: ‘as for such as were building houses, or had betrothed wives, or were planting vineyards, or were fearful, those he commanded that they should return, every man to his own house, according to the law’ — Judas Maccabeus citing this very chapter before a real battle.
★★ The vineyard clause uses a verb this project has already met, in a sense it has not. Chalal gave Deuteronomy 2:24 its sense of BEGINNING; here the same root, in the piel, moves the opposite way — releasing something FROM a restriction into ordinary use. The law behind it is Leviticus 19:23–25 (already on these pages): a new tree’s fruit is off-limits for three years, holy to Jehovah in the fourth, and only in the fifth year may an owner EAT of it — the exact verb this verse withholds from a man who has not reached that year. The Douay is the one version that keeps the technical sense visible: ‘hath not as yet made it to be common, whereof all men may eat’. The RV 1909 matches it almost exactly, «no ha hecho común uso de ella»; the RV60 revises it away to «disfrutado», enjoyed, the same flattening a revision keeps doing to this project’s sharper words. ⚠ The ASV reaches for a generic verb instead — ‘used the fruit thereof’ — and so does the KJV, ‘hath not yet eaten of it’ — either could describe a vineyard of any age.
⚠ The fourth man is not exempted for anything unfinished — he is exempted for a feeling, and the Hebrew names it with a word this very chapter has already used, turned around. Yerakh, to turn soft, is what v3 commanded the WHOLE army’s heart not to become; rakh ha-levav, tender or soft OF heart, is the diagnosis v8 gives the one man who already is that way. The exact phrase ‘the man who is fearful and tender of heart’ is a hapax — it stands nowhere else in the Hebrew Bible. The nearest thing to an echo is thematic, not verbal: Judges 7:3 (not yet on these pages) sends home ‘whoever is yare and chared’ before Gideon’s battle, sharing this verse’s first adjective and pairing it with a different second one, trembling rather than soft-hearted.
The chapter’s own logic keeps the first three exemptions from reading as cowardice-management: a man is sent home for the SAME reason he might have wanted to stay — something of his own is waiting elsewhere — before the officers ever raise the question of nerve. Only the fourth man is dismissed for fear itself, and even then the stated harm is contagion, not disgrace: lest he melt his brothers’ heart like his own heart.
Before a single arrow is loosed, Israel must PROCLAIM PEACE to any city it approaches. Surrender converts the population into forced labour — the same institution Judges 1 (already on these pages) uses of the compromise Israel later settled for with Canaanites it failed to drive out, and the same word Egypt once used on Israel. Refusal escalates to the sword, but even then only the men are killed; women, children and livestock are spoil to be kept and eaten, not destroyed. ⚠ Verse 15 draws a line this project has already been warned is about to be erased. Thus you shall do to all the cities that are very far from you — the terms above apply only OUTSIDE the land of promise. One verse later the qualifier disappears entirely.
★ The Vulgate imports one word here that the Hebrew never uses for this transaction. The Douay reads v11 ‘all the people that are therein, shall be saved, and shall serve thee paying tribute’ — a verb of rescue with no Hebrew counterpart; the actual clause is only yihyu lekha la-mas, ‘shall become yours for forced labour’. The Geneva and KJV both keep it flatter, ‘tributaries’; the NIV names the institution outright, ‘subject to forced labor’. ⚠ ‘Saved’ is not wrong about the outcome — a surrendering city does keep its people alive — but it is not what the verse says, and it quietly recasts a labour levy as a mercy.
The far city gets peace on offer and, failing that, war on limited terms — kill the combatants, keep the rest. Nothing in this paragraph anticipates what verse 16 is about to demand of a city inside the land, and the chapter does not soften the seam between the two laws.
Inside the land the distance clause vanishes: nothing that breathes may be kept alive. Deuteronomy 7:1 (already on these pages) named this ban against SEVEN nations, in this order — Hittite, Girgashite, Amorite, Canaanite, Perizzite, Hivite, Jebusite. ⚠ This verse names six, and drops the Girgashite. The Girgashite encyclopedia entry already flagged this exact gap as a reason to read the seven-nation list as a round number rather than a census; this is the verse that flag was written against. Every occurrence of the Girgashite in the whole Hebrew Bible is a list, never a narrative, and this is the one list that leaves the name out.
★★ The phrase for ‘anything that breathes’ recurs three times outside this chapter, and never again against a Canaanite. Kol neshamah stands in four verses of the Hebrew Bible: this one, and three narratives reporting a command like it carried out — Joshua 11:11 and 11:14 (not yet on these pages), both of the campaign against Hazor, and 1 Kings 15:29 (not yet on these pages), where King Baasha exterminates the entire house of Jeroboam and ‘did not leave him kol neshamah’. ⭐ The noun is the one Genesis 2:7 (already on these pages) gives the breath Jehovah breathes into the first human’s nostrils to make him a living being — nishmat chayim, the breath of life. Deuteronomy takes the very word for what makes a body alive and turns it into the technical term for leaving no body alive; 1 Kings then borrows that technical term for a purge inside Israel’s own royal house, a king erasing a king’s whole family in language this chapter built for a foreign nation.
⚠ The Vulgate, and only the Vulgate, turns the ban into a sword. The Hebrew of v17 says only ki ha-cherem tacharimem, ‘you shall devote them to destruction’, with no weapon named — the same infinitive-absolute doubling Deuteronomy 7:2 already uses, though there the object is a separate pronoun (otam) rather than a suffix, as here. The Latin instead reads interficies in ore gladii, ‘you shall kill by the edge of the sword’, and the Douay follows it: ‘shalt kill them with the edge of the sword’. That exact phrase belongs three verses earlier, at v13, describing the FAR city’s fallen men; Jerome’s Vulgate has carried it into the near cities’ ban as well — a Latin-level substitution, not a different Hebrew text underneath it, consistent with this shelf’s Douay-Rheims usually tracing its divergences to Latin rather than to Hebrew or Greek.
The stated reason is contagion, not conquest for its own sake: v18 fears the nations’ own abominations spreading to Israel, the identical vocabulary Deuteronomy 7 (already on these pages) already used and the identical anxiety chapter 13 (already on these pages) answered by turning the ban inward on an apostate Israelite town. This chapter never does that; the six — or seven — nations remain its only stated target.
The chapter that opened by sending frightened men home closes by protecting a fruit tree from an army with every reason to want the timber. Garzen returns here from its one other appearance in the Torah, Deuteronomy 19:5 (already on these pages), where the same word named the blade that killed a man by accident; there it was evidence of an intent that was absent, and here it is the thing an army must NOT swing, on purpose, against something that cannot run.
★★ The clause that gives the reason is one of the most genuinely disputed sentences in the Torah, and this shelf splits three ways, not two. Ki ha-adam etz ha-sadeh lavo mipanekha bamatzor can be read as a rhetorical question with its interrogative he unwritten before the following aleph — Hebrew's interrogative marker is sometimes left unmarked, though this project has not independently verified how common that is outside this verse — or as a plain statement. The question reading (is the tree of the field man, to withdraw before you into the siege?) is what this translation prints, and it is the shelf’s majority: ASV ‘is the tree of the field man, that it should be besieged of thee?’, NWT 1984 ‘is the tree of the field a man to be besieged by you?’, its 2013 revision ‘should you besiege a tree of the field as you would a man?’, NIV ‘are the trees people, that you should besiege them?’, NVI «¿es acaso el árbol del campo un hombre para que le pongas sitio?», and TNM 2019 «¿acaso debes cercar un árbol del campo como si fuera un hombre?». A second family reads it as a statement that the tree GIVES life: KJV ‘(for the tree of the field is man’s life)’, and the Geneva before it, identically: ‘(for the tree of the field is man’s life)’. A third, older still, reads it as a statement that the tree is NOT a combatant: the Latin Vulgate’s lignum est, et non homo, ‘it is a tree, and not a man’, followed by the Douay (‘it is a tree, and not a man, neither can it increase the number of them that fight against thee’) and, independently, by both Spanish Reina-Valeras — RV 1909 «que no es hombre el árbol del campo para venir contra ti en el cerco» and RV60 «porque el árbol del campo no es hombre para venir contra ti en el sitio». ⚠ This translation does not vote among the three; it prints the reading the majority of the shelf supports, and leaves the other two named here rather than silenced.
⭐ The TLB paraphrases past the ambiguity rather than choosing a side of it: ‘They aren’t enemies who need to be slaughtered!’ — which lands closer to the Vulgate’s logic (the tree is not a combatant) than to the KJV’s (the tree sustains life), without actually translating either clause.
Verse 20 then draws the only distinction the law needs: a tree identifiable as non-fruit-bearing may be cut for siegeworks. The chapter that began by weighing which men to spare closes by weighing which trees may be spent — the same logic of limited, deliberate destruction, one register down.
Echoes paid. The garzen that chapter 19’s own closing note promised would return here is paid at v19 — the same blade that killed a man by accident there is the blade an army must not swing on purpose here. The chanukkah/chanak entry’s forward claim that ‘a new house gets the same word’, coined for Numbers 7’s altar-dedication, is paid at v5. The Girgashite encyclopedia entry’s flag that ‘the other Deuteronomic ban names six nations and leaves the Girgashite out’ is the verse this chapter now supplies, at v17. And the shofet entry’s mention of ‘officials who address the army before a battle’ is now anchored to a real verse instead of a description with nowhere to point.
Echoes planted. Chalal returns in the very next chapter in a third sense this project has not yet used — a slain body, found in a field with no known killer (Deuteronomy 21:1, now on these pages: one root now carrying BEGIN, RELEASE-TO-COMMON-USE and SLAIN across three chapters). Kol neshamah’s two narrative sequels, Joshua 11 and 1 Kings 15 (both not yet on these pages), are flagged for when they ship. And the Jeremiah 51:46 echo of verse 3’s rare pairing is flagged the same way.
Library. Two new dictionary terms in both languages — neshamah and orlah. Three existing entries extended rather than duplicated — chalal (a second sense of the same root), chanukkah/chanak and shofet (both paying off a standing forward claim rather than repeating one). No new encyclopedia entries: the six nations, Israel and Jehovah are the chapter’s only proper nouns, and all six nations already exist on these pages.
Next installment in this book: Deuteronomy 21 — a body found in a field, no killer known, and a ritual with no trial in it at all: the nearest town’s elders break a heifer’s neck in an unworked valley and wash their hands over it, swearing our hands did not shed this blood. Then a captive woman taken in the very kind of war this chapter has just finished regulating, given a full month to mourn her parents before anything else is decided; and a rebellious son, and the law that stands behind Paul’s reading of the cross — a hanged man is under God’s curse, and must not stay on the tree overnight.