Zechariah 5 — The Mister Translation
Translator’s Notes
Twenty cubits by ten (roughly thirty feet by fifteen) is not a random size — it matches the porch of Solomon’s temple (1 Kings 6:3, not yet on these pages). A scroll unrolled to the width of the temple porch, hanging in the sky over the whole land: this is a public document, not a private one, and its scale says so before a word of it is read. KJV and ASV both keep the older “flying roll”; NIV modernizes to “flying scroll,” the object a modern reader will actually picture.
⚠ Alah, “curse” here, and alah, “to go up” — the word behind ALIYAH; see Ezra 1’s own note on the last word of the Hebrew Bible — are two completely unrelated Hebrew words. Different roots, different meanings, and in the Hebrew alphabet even different LETTERS at the start: this alah opens with an alef, that one with an ayin. Transliterated into English the distinction vanishes, and both come out looking like the same word — the way “bear” the animal and “bear,” to carry a weight, are two unrelated English words that happen to have collided into one spelling and sound. This translation keeps the two alahs as separate dictionary entries rather than letting the coincidence blur them together. The scroll itself is written on both sides — one curse against theft, one against a false oath sworn in Jehovah’s own name — covering, between the two of them, both tables of the Ten Words: what is owed to a neighbor, and what is owed to God. Each offender is “swept away, matching what is written” on his own side of the scroll.
⚠ The verb behind “swept away” is niqqah, from a root (naqah) whose most basic sense is “to empty out” — the same root that gives “clean” and “acquit” everywhere else in the Hebrew Bible. The curse does not merely punish; it EMPTIES the offender’s house out of the land, the same purging logic that runs through this whole vision and the one that follows it. The scroll does not merely accuse — it “enters” the guilty house like a resident and “consumes it, with its timber and its stones” (v4): total, structural ruin, not a fine.
⚠ An eiphah is an ordinary dry-goods basket, roughly a bushel — nowhere near large enough to seat a grown woman. The vision does not explain the mismatch and does not need to: like the golden lampstand two chapters back, scale here answers to the vision’s own logic, not a tape measure. ⚠ “This is their eye in all the land” (v6) is a genuine crux. The Masoretic Hebrew reads eynam, “their eye” — and Hebrew regularly stretches “eye” to mean “appearance” (the manna’s own “eye” was “like the eye of bdellium,” Numbers 11:7, not yet on these pages) — so “this is what they look like, everywhere in the land” is a defensible sense as it stands, matching KJV “their resemblance” and ASV “their appearance.” The Greek Septuagint instead reads avonam, “their INIQUITY” — one Hebrew letter apart from the Masoretic reading, and thematically tidier, since the basket turns out to hold Wickedness herself two verses later — the reading NIV prints outright. This translation follows the Masoretic Text, as the standing rule, and reports the alternative rather than adopting it.
The lead weight lifted off the basket’s cover (v7) reveals a woman already inside — not placed there in the vision’s own present tense, simply discovered. The angel names her outright: “This is Wickedness” (ha-rishah, the feminine abstract noun personified, matched to the basket’s own grammatical gender). He forces her back down and reseals the “mouth” of the basket with the same lead weight — the vision’s one violent gesture, aimed at an abstraction rather than a person.
⚠ The two women have wings “like the wings of a stork” — and the Hebrew name for a stork is chasidah, built directly on chesed, covenant loyalty and lovingkindness: literally “the pious one,” named for how attentively storks tend their young. Yet Torah’s own dietary law lists the stork among the UNCLEAN birds (Leviticus 11:19, not yet on these pages) — a scavenger’s diet earning an unclean label despite a name that means kindness itself. Wickedness leaves the holy land carried on the wings of a bird whose own name and status disagree with each other, which may be exactly the point: the vision does not send an eagle or a dove.
The destination is Shinar — Babylon, the plain where an earlier generation built a tower “with its top in the sky” (Genesis 11:2, on this shelf). A house is built for her there, and she is “set on her own mechunah,” a base or pedestal — the same word used elsewhere for the bronze stands under Solomon’s temple basins, the language of an idol being formally installed in its shrine. Wickedness is not merely exiled; it is given a home and an address, exactly where the exiles themselves had once been made to live.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation keeps the exact / distinct words: “curse” for alah (v3), spelled with an alef and kept apart in the dictionary from the unrelated alah, “to go up” (the ALIYAH word), despite an identical English transliteration; and the literal “their eye” for eynam (v6), reporting the Septuagint’s rival “their iniquity” rather than silently adopting it.
Echoes paid. The “land of Shinar” (v11), the same plain where humanity once built a tower “with its top in the sky,” already on this shelf at Genesis 11.
Echoes planted. The eight night visions close next chapter: four chariots patrol the whole earth, and the book’s FOURTH vision finally pays off — the high priest Joshua crowned outright with the very name promised two chapters back, “my servant, Sprout.”
Next installment in this book: Zechariah 6 — the eighth and final night vision, four chariots sent to patrol the four winds of heaven, and Joshua the high priest crowned with a real crown as a living sign of the coming Sprout.