Matthew 6 — The Mister Translation
Translator's Notes — verse by verse
Each note explains this translation's choice and compares the seven versions on the shelf. Quotations from copyrighted versions (NIV, TLB, NWT) are kept to short phrases for comparison; KJV, Geneva, Douay-Rheims and ASV are public domain.
Piety as theater. The Sermon's middle chapter opens with a header for its first three sections: do not do your righteousness "to be gazed at" — and the verb is theathēnai, the root that gave Greek its theater. The audience-word is no accident, because the performers arrive one verse later: hypokritai — in ordinary Greek, stage actors, the masked professionals (Galilee knew them: the theater at Sepphoris stood an hour's walk from Nazareth). A textual note sits in verse 1: the later manuscripts read "do not your alms" (KJV), narrowing the header to the first example; the earliest read "your righteousness" — the umbrella over all three practices — and the critical text this translation follows keeps the umbrella. No trumpet before you (no evidence anyone literally trumpeted their giving — this is satire, drawn with one stroke); the left hand kept ignorant of the right; and the section's refrain: "your Father, who sees in secret, will repay you." This site's shelf already holds the name for that: El Roi, "the God who sees" — Hagar's coinage in the desert (Genesis 16:13). One more scribal gift declined: the KJV adds "shall reward thee openly" in all three refrains — the word is absent from the earliest witnesses, and its addition quietly ruins the point: the older text lets the secret stay secret.
Paid in full. "They have their reward" — apechousin, the standing formula on Greek commercial receipts: paid in full, account closed. The applause was the payment; nothing further is owed. The word recurs like a stamp at verses 2, 5, and 16 — three receipts, three closed accounts.
The inner room, and the babble-word. Against praying on the corners of the main streets ("so that they may appear to men" — watch that verb; verse 16 will play a whole pun on it), the instruction is architectural: the tameion — the storeroom, the one room in a Galilean house with a door that shut and locked. And against the pagan style: "do not babble on" — battalogēsēte, a word found almost nowhere before this verse and quite possibly built to sound like what it means (batta-batta…), glossed by the very next phrase, "their many words" (KJV "use not vain repetitions"; NIV "do not keep on babbling"; NWT "do not say the same things over and over again"). The theology underneath is the chapter's quiet engine: "your Father knows what you need before you ask" — prayer, in this Sermon, is not information transfer.
The most-recited text in human history. Its architecture is a hinge: an address, then three your-petitions (your name, your kingdom, your will), then three us-petitions (bread, debts, rescue) — heaven's agenda before ours. "Our Father, who is in the heavens" — Matthew's plural, kept as everywhere in this book. "Let your name be sanctified" (hagiasthētō — set apart, treated as holy): the KJV's "hallowed be thy name" is the same word wearing four centuries of polish (the NWT reads "sanctified" with us). "Let your will come to be" — genēthētō, the LXX's own verb from creation's "let there be." Then the hardest word in the prayer: ton arton hēmōn ton epiousion. This adjective appears nowhere else in Greek literature — Origen, the third century's best philologist, said plainly that the evangelists appear to have coined it. From epienai, "the coming (day)," it most likely means bread for the day ahead — asked for today: tomorrow's ration requested one sunrise at a time, the rhythm of the manna. The shelf tells the whole uncertainty: KJV "our daily bread"; Douay, translating the Vulgate of Matthew literally, prints the strangest word on any shelf — "our supersubstantial bread." And "forgive us our debts" (opheilēmata — Aramaic choba means both debt and sin; KJV "debts" with us; Luke's version says "sins"; the liturgy's "trespasses" comes not from the prayer but from verse 14, via Tyndale). The last petition pays this site's freshest echo: "rescue us apo tou ponērou" — "from the evil one," or "from evil": the same ambiguous genitive flagged at 5:37, unresolvable by grammar alone (KJV "deliver us from evil"; NIV "the evil one").
The famous missing doxology. "For thine is the kingdom, and the power, and the glory, for ever. Amen" (KJV, and Geneva before it) — is not in the earliest manuscripts. Vaticanus, Sinaiticus, and Bezae all end the prayer at "the evil one"; the early commentators who walk through the prayer line by line (Origen, Tertullian, Cyprian) show no knowledge of it in Matthew. Its pedigree is liturgical: the Didache — a church manual within living memory of the apostles — already appends a shorter form ("for yours is the power and the glory forever") when it prescribes this prayer three times a day, and the full triplet echoes David's blessing in 1 Chronicles 29:11. Worship wrote it; scribes, hearing it every week, eventually copied what their ears expected. The critical text omits it, and so does this translation — in the company, delightfully, of Douay: the Vulgate never had it, so on this most Protestant of lines, Rome and the critical editors agree against the King James.
Where "trespasses" came from. The prayer said debts; this two-verse coda — the only petition Jesus stops to underline — switches to paraptōmata, "missteps" (a stumble off the path, a false step). Tyndale rendered it "trespasses" here, the Book of Common Prayer carried his word up into the prayer itself, and English-speaking congregations have prayed a verse-14 word in a verse-12 slot ever since. The logic of the coda is a closed loop, stated without cushioning: forgiveness withheld below interrupts forgiveness from above — the one petition of the prayer whose terms the pray-er sets personally.
The Greek's own pun, kept. The gloomy fasters "make their faces disappear" — ash-smeared, unwashed, theatrically wrecked — "so that they may appear to men as fasting": aphanizousin… phanōsin, vanish to be visible, the wordplay sitting right in the Greek and kept in the English. The counter-instruction is festive camouflage: oil your head and wash your face — groom yourself like a man going to a banquet, so the fast belongs to God alone. And a small fidelity: verse 18 twice shifts to a different secret-word (en tō kryphaiō, "in hiding") than verses 4 and 6's en tō kryptō ("in secret") — the variation is the text's, so it is this translation's too.
Treasure that disappears — the pun's second act. The verb that vanished the fasters' faces returns for the treasure: moth and devouring (brōsis, "eating" — rust, worm, rot; KJV "rust") "make them disappear" (aphanizei — the same word as verse 16). And "thieves dig through" (dioryssousin) — through, not in: a Galilean burglar went through the mud-brick wall itself. Then the needle: "where your treasure is, there your heart will be also" — the Sermon's compass; the heart follows the deposit.
The undivided eye, and the Aramaic ledger-word. "If your eye is undivided" — haplous: single, simple, sound (KJV "single"; NWT "simple"; NIV "healthy") — against the evil eye, which in Hebrew idiom is the stingy eye (Deuteronomy 15:9 warns against an "evil eye" toward a poor brother): the whole pair is about undivided generosity as much as optics, which is exactly why the next sentence is about divided service. "No one can be a slave to two masters" (douleuein — not moonlighting; ownership). "You cannot be slaves to God and to Mammon" — mamōnas, Aramaic for wealth/property (from the same root as amen: that in which one trusts), left untranslated by Matthew and by nearly everyone since (KJV "mammon"; NIV breaks ranks: "money") — not a Canaanite deity, but capital personified by the grammar of the sentence itself: only masters have slaves.
The anxiety drumbeat. Six times in ten verses: merimnaō — "be anxious, be pulled apart by care" (vv 25, 27, 28, 31, 34 twice). The KJV's "take no thought" is 1611 English in which "thought" meant anxious brooding — four centuries later it reads like a ban on planning, one of the shelf's best examples of a translation aging out from under its readers (ASV already corrects to "be not anxious"; TLB "don't worry"). The arguments are two creatures and a flower: "the birds of the heaven" — the Greek Bible's exact phrase from the creation account, where the Creator hands "every green plant for food" to everything that lives (Genesis 1:30): the feeding of the unemployed sparrow was on the record from page one. A textual footnote: the earliest witnesses ask only "what you will eat" in verse 25 — the "or what you will drink" of the later mass (KJV) drifts in from verse 31, where the question belongs. The cubit of verse 27 measures a puzzle: added to one's hēlikia — height, or lifespan? A cubit of height would be grotesque; a cubit of time is a mixed metaphor most readers hear as the point — worry cannot add the smallest unit to either (NIV "a single hour").
Solomon loses a beauty contest, and the pet word. "Study the lilies of the field" — likely the scarlet anemones that still carpet Galilee each spring — "not even Solomon in all his glory" (the gold-shielded, ivory-throned zenith of 1 Kings 10) "was clothed like one of these." Grass — oven fuel by tomorrow, in the klibanos — outdressing the richest king on the shelf; "will he not much more clothe you, you little-faiths?" One Greek word, oligopistoi — Matthew's pet name for disciples (it returns in the storm, 8:26, and on the water, 14:31): not faithless, just chronically under-supplied — a diagnosis with affection in it. Verse 33 carries one last variant: the earliest text says "seek first the kingdom, and his righteousness" — later scribes supplied "of God" (KJV), giving Matthew a phrase he almost never uses (his idiom, thirty-plus times, is "of the heavens" — the addition is well-meant and un-Matthean). And the Sermon's driest proverb closes the chapter: "Sufficient for the day is its own trouble" — tomorrow is a bad creditor; do not borrow from it.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation sides with the literal shelf: "forgive us our debts" with the KJV (the liturgy's "trespasses" belongs to verse 14); "Mammon" kept, with everyone but the NIV; and the doxology omitted with the earliest manuscripts — and with Douay, whose Vulgate never had it.
Where it goes its own way: "let your name be sanctified" (KJV "hallowed" — same word, four centuries of polish); "our bread for the day ahead" for the hapax epiousios (KJV "daily"; Douay, unforgettably, "supersubstantial"); "to be gazed at" for the theater-verb; the disappear/appear pun kept at verse 16 and paid again at verse 19; "your eye is undivided" (KJV "single"); "do not babble on" (KJV "use not vain repetitions"); and "you little-faiths" for Matthew's one-word pet name oligopistoi.
Echoes paid and planted. Paid: "from the evil one" — the ambiguity flagged at 5:37, home in the prayer; the Father "who sees in secret" beside Hagar's El Roi, "the God who sees" (16:13); the birds fed by the Creator who handed out food on the record's first page (1:30); bread by sweat in Eden's sentence (3:19), asked back as a gift one day at a time; and "seek first… righteousness" answering the fourth Beatitude's hunger (5:6). Planted: "little-faiths," waiting for the storm (8:26); peirasmos, "testing," waiting for Gethsemane ("pray that you not enter into testing," 26:41); the overflow-word thread of 5:20 still running; and the Sermon's last chapter ahead — judging, the narrow gate, and a house on rock.
Next installment in this book: Matthew 7 — do not judge, the narrow gate, wolves in sheep's clothing, and the house on the rock: the Sermon's finale.