Job 1 — The Mister Translation
Translator’s Notes
«There was a man in the land of Uz.» Not “in the days of” any king; no genealogy, no tribe, no covenant. The book opens like a folktale, and it opens outside: Uz cannot be located with any confidence (Lamentations 4:21 associates it with Edom, Genesis with Aramean names), Job is not an Israelite, and nothing in the story depends on Israel at all. This is the one book of the Hebrew Bible whose hero stands entirely outside the covenant — which is exactly why it can ask its question without the covenant answering for it.
«Blameless and upright.» The word is tam, and this translation has rendered its family “blameless” since Noah (Genesis 6:9) and Jacob (Genesis 25:27). It means whole, of a piece, undivided — integrity rather than flawlessness. KJV and ASV print “perfect,” which in 1611 meant complete but has since misled four centuries of English readers into thinking the book claims Job never sinned. It does not claim that. It claims he was all one thing — and the entire plot is a test of whether that wholeness is bought.
The numbers are the shape of a story, not an inventory. Seven sons and three daughters; seven thousand sheep, three thousand camels; five hundred and five hundred. Seven and three are the roundest numbers the Bible has, and in the last chapter every one of them is doubled except the children, who are merely replaced in kind — a detail readers have found unbearable and instructive for two thousand years. “Greater than all the sons of the east” puts him among the proverbially wise of the desert peoples (1 Kings 4:30).
⚠ And now the strangest feature of the Hebrew, established here so it can be heard four more times: the text says BLESS where it means CURSE. “Perhaps my sons have sinned and blessed God in their hearts” — the verb is berakh, plainly and only “bless,” and it is used this way again at v11, and twice more in chapter 2 (2:5, 2:9, where Job’s wife tells him to “bless God and die”). Every English version silently prints “curse,” and every English version is right about the sense. But the Hebrew is doing something the translations cannot: the scribes would not write the words “curse God,” even in a sentence reporting that somebody else did — so the text substitutes the opposite word and trusts the reader. We print what it says. Hold on to it: in verse 21 Job will use the same verb straight, and the collision is the point of the chapter.
Job’s sacrifices are pre-emptive, and that is characterization. He offers for sins that may not have been committed, in his children’s hearts, where nobody could see them — “thus Job would do, all the days.” It is scrupulous, tender, and faintly anxious, and the book puts it in before the wager so that the reader knows the man is real before the argument starts.
⚠ There is no “Satan” in the Hebrew of this chapter. The text reads ha-satan — with the definite article, every one of the fourteen times it appears in Job. Hebrew does not put “the” in front of proper names. This is a title, an office: satan means one who opposes, obstructs, or brings a charge, and the satan is the one whose function that is. So this translation prints Mister “the Accuser,” with “the Adversary” as an equally good rendering (it is what the 1985 Jewish Publication Society version prints). KJV, ASV, NIV and NWT all print “Satan” as a name, which quietly imports into this book a fully developed devil it does not have.
The supporting evidence is worth having, because this is not a modern idea:
• In Zechariah 3:1–2 the same figure — ha-satan, with the article — stands at the right hand of the high priest “to accuse him,” in a courtroom scene, and is rebuked.
• In Numbers 22:22 the angel of Jehovah takes his stand in Balaam’s road “as a satan against him” — God’s own angel, performing the function, in the plainest possible demonstration that the word is a role.
• The one place in the Hebrew Bible where the word appears without the article, and so may be a name, is 1 Chronicles 21:1 — which is also the latest of these texts, and which tells the same story as 2 Samuel 24, where the one who incites David is Jehovah. The development of the word into a name is visible inside the Bible, and Job stands at the early end of it.
«The sons of God» (bnei ha-Elohim) is the divine council — the heavenly court that appears also at 1 Kings 22:19–22 and Psalm 82, and whose members the reader last met, more disturbingly, in Genesis 6:2. They come to “present themselves,” the verb for a servant reporting for duty. The Accuser is among them: not an intruder, not yet an enemy of God, but a member of the staff with an unpleasant portfolio.
«From roving about on the earth.» The answer is either a patrol report (imperial spies did exactly this, and Zechariah 1:10–11 uses the same picture of riders who “walk to and fro through the earth”) or an evasion. The Hebrew supports both, and the book — which is going to be about a question nobody answers — declines to say.
And it is God who raises the subject. “Have you set your heart on my servant Job?” The Accuser does not arrive with a complaint; he is asked. Whatever else the chapter is doing, it will not let the reader put the whole thing on the prosecutor.
⚠ Everything after this hangs on one word. Ha-chinnam yare Iyyov Elohim — “Is it for nothing that Job fears God?” Chinnam means gratis: without payment, for free, for no return. The Accuser is not questioning whether Job is good. He concedes it — he has to, God has just said it and he does not argue. He is questioning whether goodness like that can exist unpaid; whether piety is anything but a sound investment. Take away the return and see what is left.
Notice what that makes the book. It is not, at bottom, about why the innocent suffer — that is the question Job’s friends will spend thirty chapters answering badly. It is about whether disinterested love of God is possible, and the only way to find out is to remove every reason for it. God accepts the terms, and the reader is put in the excruciating position of knowing why this is happening while Job never will.
A word this site met two books ago. Chinnam is the same word Malachi used of a priesthood that would not so much as kindle the altar fire for free (Malachi 1:10, on one reading of the verse). Malachi’s priests were the Accuser’s case, proven. Job is the test of whether anyone is the counter-example.
«Have you not put a HEDGE about him?» Sakhta — you have fenced him round, on every side. It is a farmer’s word, and it is an accusation of favoritism dressed as an observation, and it is also, uncomfortably, true. ⚠ The Hebrew of this verse carries a ketiv/qere: the consonants as written give a short form of “you,” the reading tradition supplies the long one. Nothing in the sense turns on it.
«His livestock has broken out in the land» — parats, to burst through a wall. The blessing is pictured as pressure: the herds are too big for the hedge that protects them.
«Put forth your hand… only against him do not put forth your hand.» The word hand does the work of the whole exchange, and the versions rightly keep it. The Accuser asks God to strike; God hands over the power and draws a line around Job’s body — a line that will be moved in the next chapter. The clause “if he does not bless you to your face” (v11) is a Hebrew oath-form: a self-curse with the second half politely swallowed, which is how emphatic promises are made. English gets it as “he will surely curse you.” The Accuser is not predicting. He is swearing.
The drumbeat. Four disasters, four survivors, and each of the four ends on exactly the same clause — “and I alone have escaped, only I, to tell you” — with the previous man still speaking when the next arrives. The repetition is not clumsiness; it is the technique of oral storytelling, and it is doing to the reader what it is doing to Job: no pause, no room to absorb one blow before the next. This translation keeps all four identical, as the Hebrew does. TLB varies the wording for readability and loses the hammer.
They alternate on purpose: human raiders (Sabeans), then fire from the sky; human raiders (Chaldeans), then wind from the desert. Two enemies you could name and go to war with, two you could not. And the four together take everything in the order it was listed in verses 2–3, in reverse — the property first, the children last.
⚠ «The FIRE OF GOD fell from the heavens.» This is the cruelest sentence in the chapter, and it is easy to read past. It is ordinary Hebrew for lightning — but the reader, who has just watched the scene in heaven, cannot hear it as merely meteorological, and the messenger who says it has no idea what he is saying. The book has already told us who is behind the disasters and it is not God directly; and now a servant stands in front of Job and calls it the fire of God. Nobody in the story is in a position to correct him.
«A messenger came.» The word is mal’akh — the same word that means angel. The heavenly messengers have finished their business; the earthly ones are now running.
Sabeans and Chaldeans. Both are peoples, not empires, here: Sheba (the Hebrew simply says “Sheba”) is the caravan kingdom of south Arabia, the home of the queen who visits Solomon; and the Chaldeans appear as desert raiders “in three columns,” centuries before they become the Neo-Babylonian empire. That is a genuinely archaic touch — the same name has meant three different things on this site already (Abraham’s “Ur of the Chaldeans,” Daniel’s guild of diviners, and now a raiding party) — and it is one of the reasons the story is usually felt to be set in patriarchal times, however late the book was written.
The last messenger’s first sentence quotes verse 13 word for word. The reader is told where the children are at the start of the day, and then told again, in the mouth of the man who watched the roof come down.
He does the mourning rites, correctly and completely. Tore his robe, shaved his head, fell to the ground — and then the verb nobody expects: and he worshiped. The book will not let grief and worship be alternatives. What it describes is not composure; the tearing and the shaving are violent, public, conventional acts of devastation. He is wrecked, and prostrate, and those are the same posture.
⚠ «Naked I shall return THERE.» Return where? Not to his mother’s womb, which is the only place named. Hebrew says shammah, “thither,” and leaves it: the earth, the grave, the dark. KJV and ASV keep the vagueness (“shall I return thither”); NIV resolves it away with “I will depart.” We keep the word, because a man who has just lost ten children and cannot name where they have gone is saying something precise by being vague.
⚠ And here is what the chapter was built for. “May the name of Jehovah be blessed” — berakh, the identical verb that has been standing in for curse since verse 5, and that the Accuser used in his oath nine verses ago (“he will bless you to your face”). The Accuser said Job would say this word. Job says it. And he means it the other way. No translation that prints “curse” in verse 11 and “blessed” in verse 21 can show you that they are the same word — and the whole first round of the wager turns on which way that one verb points.
«Jehovah gave and Jehovah has taken.» Note that Job attributes it all to God directly. He is, from the reader’s privileged seat, not quite right — and the book does not correct him, then or ever. Notice also what he does not say: nothing about deserving, nothing about a reason.
«And laid nothing unsavory to God’s charge.» Tiflah is a rare word from a root meaning tasteless, unseasoned (Job 6:6 asks whether what is taphel can be eaten without salt). So the charge Job does not bring is not exactly blasphemy: it is that God is insipid, that there is nothing in him. KJV “nor charged God foolishly”; ASV “nor charged God with foolishness”; NIV “did not charge God with wrongdoing.” We keep the taste in it.
⚠ And read the last verse for what it actually says. It says Job did not sin. It does not say he was patient, or serene, or unshaken, or that he felt what he said. “The patience of Job” (James 5:11 in the older English) is drawn from this prose frame, and from chapter 3 onward the man in the poetry will curse the day he was born, accuse God of hunting him, and demand a hearing — and at the very end God will say that Job, not his careful friends, spoke of him rightly. The frame is not the whole book; it is the setup for it.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation keeps the exact / distinct words: “blameless” for tam, the same rendering as Noah and Jacob, so the word means whole and not flawless; “the Accuser” for ha-satan, because Hebrew does not put “the” in front of a name; “blessed” kept where the Hebrew says bless and means curse (vv 5, 11), so that Job’s straight use of it in v21 collides with it; “for nothing” for chinnam, the hinge of the book; “hedge” for sakh and “broken out” for parats; “I alone have escaped, only I, to tell you” identical in all four mouths; “there” left unresolved in v21; and “unsavory” for tiflah, keeping the taste in the accusation Job refuses to make.
Echoes paid. Tam from Noah (Genesis 6:9) and Jacob (Genesis 25:27); the sons of God of Genesis 6:2, in a far more orderly setting; and chinnam from Malachi 1:10 — the priests who would not serve for free, set against a man being tested to find out whether anyone ever does.
Echoes planted. The doubled numbers, restored twofold in 42:10 — except the children. The hand, and the line drawn around Job’s body, which chapter 2 will move. The Accuser, who wins the right to a second round and then vanishes from the book entirely and is never mentioned again — not in the speeches, not in God’s answer, not at the end. And the word bless, which Job’s wife will use in the euphemistic sense in 2:9 (“bless God and die”) and which the book keeps turning over.
Job is a new book on the site. Next in sequence: Job 2 — the council meets a second time, the line around Job’s body is moved, and he is struck from the sole of his foot to the crown of his head; his wife asks him the shortest and hardest question in the book; and three friends come, and sit with him on the ground seven days and seven nights, and say nothing — the last wise thing any of them does.