Jeremiah 21 — The Mister Translation
Translator's Notes — verse by verse
Each note explains this translation's choice and compares the seven versions on the shelf. Quotations from copyrighted versions (NIV, TLB, NWT) are kept to short phrases for comparison; KJV, Geneva, Douay-Rheims and ASV are public domain.
The other Pashhur — and the scroll's own filing system. Read carefully: this is not chapter 20's Pashhur (son of Immer, the stocks). This one is Pashhur son of Malchiah — and the book has jumped seventeen years: chapter 20 stood in Jehoiakim's Jerusalem around 605 BC; chapter 21 opens in the final siege under Zedekiah, 588. Jeremiah's chapters are filed by theme and catchword, not by calendar — and the likeliest reason these two scenes sit side by side is the shared name itself: the scroll's ancient editors shelved Pashhur next to Pashhur. This second Pashhur has a future in the book: he stands among the officials who drop Jeremiah into the cistern (38:1) — the same verse where a "Gedaliah son of Pashhur" appears, whose clay seal-impression came out of the City of David's ash (chapter 20's note carries that story). Note also the king's spelling: Nebuchadrezzar, with an r — Jeremiah's usual form, closest to the Akkadian Nabû-kudurri-uṣur (KJV and ASV keep the r here; Douay writes "Nabuchodonosor," a third spelling on one shelf; the familiar "Nebuchadnezzar" is the softened form Kings and Daniel use).
The request: a rerun of the wondrous works. "Perhaps Jehovah will deal with us according to all his wondrous works" — niflaot, the Exodus-wonder word. The delegation is asking, in effect, for the archives: another Red Sea, or another night like 701 BC, when Sennacherib's army melted away from these same walls. It is a real prayer, prayed at the last possible hour, by a court that has ignored the praying prophet for forty years.
The Exodus formula, aimed inward. The answer begins with the weapons turned around in the defenders' own hands — and then the most chilling sentence in the book's diplomacy: "I myself will fight against you — with an outstretched hand and with a strong arm." That is the redemption formula: "a mighty hand and an outstretched arm" is how Deuteronomy says brought you out of Egypt, over and over, like a creed. The delegation asked for the Exodus God; the answer is that he is already on the field — on the other side. The triad that will drum through the rest of the book follows — sword, famine, pestilence — and the sentence on the court ends with a triple negation as bleak as Hebrew can build: "he will not spare… and he will not pity… and he will not have compassion." Zedekiah's own end (not told here; 39:5-7 will tell it) matched the oracle's temperature.
The Two Ways, at their sharpest. "Look — I am setting before you the way of life and the way of death" is Deuteronomy 30:19 quoted back to its own people — "I have set before you life and death… therefore choose life" — but with the choice shrunk to one grim door: staying in the city is the way of death (sword, famine, pestilence, the triad again); the way of life is to walk out and surrender. This site met the Two Ways three chapters ago at the Sermon's narrow gate, and in the Didache's opening line; here the fork is drawn on a wartime map, and the life-road runs straight into the enemy camp. "He shall have his life as spoil" (KJV "his life shall be unto him for a prey"; NIV "will escape with their lives") — a soldier's grim idiom: the only plunder you will carry out of this war is yourself. Jeremiah will hand the phrase, later, to the two men who trusted him (38:2 repeats this oracle nearly verbatim — and it is exactly the preaching that gets him thrown into the cistern as a traitor, 38:4; Ebed-melech and Baruch each receive "your life as spoil" as a personal promise, 39:18; 45:5). A scroll-note: verse 9 carries a ketiv/qere — the written and read forms of "he shall live" standing side by side in the Hebrew column, the manuscript's double track this site first met in Daniel 11.
The throne's one job. The oracle pivots from the people to the dynasty: "House of David… render justice in the morning" (KJV "Execute judgment in the morning") — the king's court sat at the gate in the cool of the morning; daily justice, especially for "the robbed," was the Davidic job description, and this site's shelf holds the original posting: Abraham's household was chosen "to do righteousness and justice" (Genesis 18:19). The alternative is the chapter's fire-chain: wrath "like fire… with none to quench it" (v12), lit for real in verse 14 — "I will kindle a fire in her forest": Jerusalem's "forest" is Solomon's cedar palace, the House of the Forest of Lebanon — the royal complex itself as kindling (2 Kings 25:9 reports the fulfillment: "every great house he burned with fire"). Verse 12 carries the chapter's second ketiv/qere: the written "their doings" beside the read "your doings" — the scribes preserving even the wobble of a pronoun.
The smug topography. "Look — I am against you, inhabitant of the valley, rock of the plain" (KJV "O inhabitant of the valley, and rock of the plain") — Jerusalem, ringed by ravines on three sides, purring over its own geography: "Who shall come down against us? And who shall enter our lairs?" — me'onot, animal dens: the city as a predator confident in its cave. This site has heard a fortified boast answered from above before — at Babel, where the builders reached up and "Jehovah came down." The answer to "who shall come down against us?" was on file.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation sides with the literal shelf: "Nebuchadrezzar" kept with the r, as Jeremiah spells him (with KJV and ASV, against Douay's "Nabuchodonosor" and the harmonized "Nebuchadnezzar" of Kings and Daniel); the sword–famine–pestilence triad in the scroll's own order.
Where it goes its own way: "he shall have his life as spoil" (KJV "for a prey") — the soldier's-booty idiom kept; "wondrous works" for niflaot, the Exodus-wonder word; "our lairs" for the dens of verse 13 (KJV "habitations" — the animal image kept); "render justice in the morning" (KJV "execute judgment").
Echoes paid and planted. Paid: the Two Ways — Deuteronomy's fork, the Sermon's two gates (Matthew 7:13), now drawn on a wartime map; Babylon, named from the stocks (20:4) and now at the walls — the book's two Pashhur scenes filed side by side, seventeen years apart; the house of David measured against Abraham's brief, "to do righteousness and justice" (18:19); the city that asks "who shall come down against us?" answered by Babel's page — "Jehovah came down" (11:5); and the same king on two pages — Daniel's opening (his first visit, 605) and this oracle (his last, 588) (Daniel 1:1). Planted: this oracle as the charge sheet for the cistern (38:1-4 — with this chapter's Pashhur among the accusers); "life as spoil" waiting for Ebed-melech and Baruch; the fire in the cedar "forest," waiting for 586 and 2 Kings 25:9; and Zedekiah's last sight, waiting at Riblah.
Next installment in this book: Jeremiah 22 — the tariff of kings: "weep not for the dead," the donkey's burial, and Coniah the discarded signet ring.