2 Samuel 1 — The Mister Translation
How the mighty have fallen!note
¡Cómo han caído los valientes!
proclaim it not in the streets of Ashkelon,
lest the daughters of the Philistines rejoice,
lest the daughters of the uncircumcised exult.note
no lo proclaméis en las calles de Ascalón,
no sea que se alegren las hijas de los filisteos,
no sea que salten de gozo las hijas de los incircuncisos.
let there be no dew and no rain on you, nor fields of offerings;
for there the shield of the mighty was defiled,
the shield of Saul, not anointed with oil.note
ni rocío ni lluvia haya sobre vosotros, ni campos de ofrendas;
porque allí fue mancillado el escudo de los valientes,
el escudo de Saúl, no ungido con aceite.
from the fat of the mighty,
the bow of Jonathan did not turn back,
and the sword of Saul did not return empty.note
de la grosura de los valientes,
el arco de Jonatán no volvía atrás,
ni la espada de Saúl volvía vacía.
and in their death they were not parted;
they were swifter than eagles,
they were stronger than lions.note
y en su muerte no fueron separados;
más ligeros eran que las águilas,
más fuertes que los leones.
who clothed you in scarlet with luxuries,
who put ornaments of gold on your clothing.note
que os vestía de escarlata con delicias,
que ponía adornos de oro sobre vuestros vestidos.
Jonathan lies slain on your high places.note
Jonatán yace muerto sobre tus alturas.
you were very pleasant to me.
Your love to me was more wonderful than the love of women.note
me fuiste muy agradable.
Más maravilloso me fue tu amor que el amor de las mujeres.
and the weapons of war perished!note
y perecieron las armas de guerra!
Translator’s Notes
The book opens on the far side of a disaster it does not narrate. First and Second Samuel are ONE book in the Hebrew tradition, divided only when the Greek translation split it for scroll length — so this is not a fresh start but the next sentence. Saul has just died on Mount Gilboa; David, who has spent years as a fugitive from him, is at Ziklag, having just come back from destroying a raiding force of Amalekites.
⚠ And here is the chapter’s first problem: the messenger’s story does not match the account of Saul’s death. The end of 1 Samuel is explicit — Saul asked his armor-bearer to run him through, the man refused, and Saul took his own sword and fell on it; the armor-bearer saw he was dead and did the same (31:4-5). This man claims he found Saul leaning on his spear and finished him at Saul’s own request. The two accounts cannot both be flat description.
Two readings, and the older one is much the stronger. • He is LYING — a scavenger who came on the body, took the crown and the armlet, and invented a role for himself to sell to Saul’s rival. Everything in the telling supports it: he arrives with the regalia in hand, he addresses David as “my lord,” and he expects a reward for the news. The narrator reports his speech without endorsing it. • Two traditions — a minority view that the chapter preserves a variant account of the death. ⚠ The text itself never adjudicates; but it does show David treating the confession as true FOR THE PURPOSE OF SENTENCING (v16), which is a different thing from the narrator vouching for it.
“Clothes torn and earth on his head” is the standard posture of a bearer of catastrophic news (compare 1 Samuel 4:12). The performance is correct in every detail — which is part of the point. His opening claim is a doubled Hebrew verb, niqro niqreti, “by pure chance I chanced” — KJV “As I happened by chance”; the ESV “By chance I happened.” He is at pains to say he was not looting.
What he actually produces is the regalia: the nezer — the royal diadem, the same word used of the high priest’s golden plate and of the Nazirite’s consecration — and an armlet. KJV “the crown that was upon his head, and the bracelet that was on his arm”; the NIV “the band on his arm.” Whatever happened on that hill, he had his hands on the body.
The word for what has seized Saul (v9, shavatz) occurs only here and is uncertain — a cramp, a convulsion, or the swimming dizziness of a man bleeding out. KJV “anguish is come upon me”; the ESV “anguish has seized me.”
⚠ And then the response nobody expects. David’s enemy is dead, the throne he was anointed for is empty, and he tears his clothes and fasts until evening. Note who is mourned, in order: Saul, Jonathan, “the people of Jehovah,” and “the house of Israel.” A national defeat is grieved as a national defeat. There is no word of relief anywhere in the chapter.
⚠ «How were you not afraid to stretch out your hand to destroy JEHOVAH’S ANOINTED?» This is the settled principle of David’s whole exile. Twice he had Saul at his mercy in a cave and in a camp, and twice he refused, using this exact phrase: “Jehovah forbid that I should stretch out my hand against Jehovah’s ANOINTED” (1 Samuel 24:6; 26:9-11). He would not take the crown by killing for it, and he will not now reward a man who says he did.
The word is mashiach — the anointed one, which comes into English through Greek as MESSIAH and, translated rather than transliterated, as CHRIST. Here it means exactly what it says: a king smeared with oil at his installation, so that the office is God’s property and not the officeholder’s. The later, larger sense grows out of this one.
“Your blood be on your own head, for your own MOUTH has testified against you.” David convicts him on his own confession, which is the tidy legal form of a very sharp irony: if the man was lying to get paid, his lie is what kills him. He has talked himself into a capital charge in order to claim a reward. KJV “Thy blood be upon thy head; for thy mouth hath testified against thee”; the ESV the same in modern dress.
⚠ And notice who he is. The man is an AMALEKITE — and Saul’s kingdom was torn from him precisely for sparing Amalek and their king Agag when he had been told to destroy them (1 Samuel 15). A story that began with Saul refusing to finish Amalek ends with an Amalekite claiming to have finished Saul. The book does not comment. It simply lets the man name his own nationality, twice — the second time as “the son of a SOJOURNER, an Amalekite” (v13), a resident foreigner living under Israel’s law, which is what makes him answerable to it. KJV “the son of a stranger, an Amalekite”; the NIV “the son of a foreigner.”
The lament is one of the oldest pieces of Hebrew poetry in the Bible, and the chapter says where it came from: the Book of Jashar — a collection this text quotes and we no longer possess (Joshua 10:13 quotes it too). Scripture openly cites sources that have not survived; the honest thing is to say so.
⚠ «To teach the sons of Judah the BOW» (v18) is genuinely unclear. Either David ordered archery training — the arm of war that had just failed on Gilboa — or “The Bow” is the SONG’S TITLE, named from Jonathan’s bow in verse 22, and what is taught is the lament. KJV supplies the first: “he bade them teach the children of Judah the use of the bow” (the words “the use of” are the translators’); the ESV takes the second, “he said it should be taught to the people of Judah.”
«The GLORY, O Israel, lies slain on your high places.» The word is tzvi, which means both BEAUTY / glory and GAZELLE — and the versions split down the middle. KJV “The beauty of Israel is slain upon thy high places”; the ESV “Your glory, O Israel, is slain”; the NIV takes the animal, “A gazelle lies slain on your heights.” The ambiguity may well be deliberate — a lament for a swift thing brought down suits both.
“Tell it not in Gath, proclaim it not in the streets of Ashkelon.” Two Philistine cities — and Gath is where David himself had taken refuge from Saul (1 Samuel 27). His first instinct is not triumph but a wish that the enemy never hear of it.
⚠ The curse on the mountains (v21) is savage and precise: no dew, no rain, no fields of offerings — the ground where the king fell is asked to stay barren. And then a bitter play the English usually loses: the shield of Saul lies there “not mashiach with oil.” A shield was oiled to keep the leather supple; the same word that made Saul JEHOVAH’S ANOINTED is used of the shield nobody will oil again.
What the lament does NOT do is the most striking thing about it. It says nothing of Saul’s madness, the spear thrown at David, the years of pursuit, the priests of Nob. It praises him — his speed, his sword, the wealth he brought the women of Israel — and buries the rest. “Beloved and lovely in their lives, and in their death they were not parted” is generous past the point of accuracy, which is what a lament is for.
⚠ «Your love to me was more wonderful than the love of women» (v26). The readings, with their pedigrees. • Covenant loyalty — the majority scholarly reading, and the one the surrounding chapters actually supply the vocabulary for: to LOVE (ahav) is standard ancient Near Eastern language for treaty and political fidelity (Hiram “loved” David, 1 Kings 5:1; all Israel and Judah “loved” him, 1 Samuel 18:16). Jonathan and David are repeatedly said to have cut a COVENANT (1 Samuel 18:3; 20:16-17; 23:18), and Jonathan sealed it by handing over his robe and armor — the crown-prince ceding his own succession. On this reading the line means: your sworn loyalty outdid even the bonds of marriage, which is astonishing precisely because Jonathan gave up a throne. • Deep friendship — the traditional reading, and compatible with the first. • A romantic or erotic relationship — a modern reading, argued from the intensity of this verse and the covenant scenes. ⚠ What the text supplies is covenant vocabulary and no description of physical intimacy; what it does not supply is a statement settling the question either way. The library lays the readings out with their support and does not vote.
“How the mighty have fallen” tolls three times — verses 19, 25, 27 — and the last word of the poem is not a person but equipment: “and the weapons of war perished.” A lament for two men ends by mourning the arsenal of a nation.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation keeps the exact / distinct words: “Jehovah’s anointed” for meshiach Jehovah, and the same root left visible in the lament’s bitter pun — the shield “not anointed with oil” (v21); “the glory” for tzvi, with the gazelle reading noted rather than chosen; “the Bow” left ambiguous at v18, since it is either archery or the poem’s title; “lament” for qinah, a named genre and not just sadness; and the doubled “by pure chance I chanced” behind the messenger’s alibi.
Echoes paid. David’s twice-refused chance to kill Saul and the phrase he used both times (1 Samuel 24:6; 26:9), now the ground of a death sentence; Amalek, whom Saul was told to destroy and spared (1 Samuel 15) — and an Amalekite claims to have finished him; Ziklag and the raid David has just returned from (1 Samuel 30); and Jonathan’s covenant, sealed by handing over his robe and armor (1 Samuel 18:3-4).
Echoes planted. The house of Saul, whose long dying occupies the next three chapters; Jonathan’s oath, which David keeps years later at a table set for a crippled man (2 Samuel 9); the Book of Jashar, quoted here and at Joshua 10:13 and lost since; and the pattern of lament that will return over Abner and, unbearably, over Absalom.
Next in this book: 2 Samuel 2 — David asks where he should go and is told Hebron; Judah anoints him king while Abner crowns Saul’s surviving son over the north, and the two houses meet at the pool of Gibeon in a contest that begins as a game and ends as a war.