Titus 1 — The Mister Translation
Translator’s Notes
⚠ The letter opens with a single, front-loaded sentence of doctrine before it ever reaches the addressee. Of the three Pastorals this greeting is by far the fullest — four verses that state the faith, the hope and the God behind the mission before naming Titus at all. It is the sort of weight one puts at the head of a letter meant to be read aloud to a congregation, not only to the man who carries it. The authorship question that hangs over all three letters (set out in the book intro, and in the note to 1 Timothy 1:1) hangs over this one too; the notes read the Greek as it stands.
“A slave of God.” Doulos theou — and this is the only place Paul calls himself the slave of God. Everywhere else he is “a slave of Christ Jesus” (Romans 1:1; Philippians 1:1); here the older, Hebrew-scriptural title — “the servant of Jehovah,” worn by Moses and the prophets — is set on him instead. KJV softens it to “a servant of God”; the word is the ordinary one for a slave.
⚠ “The knowledge of the truth that accords with GODLINESS.” Eusebeia — reverence, ordered devotion — is nearly absent from the undisputed Paul and everywhere in the Pastorals, where the faith is described less as righteousness reckoned than as a settled, visible piety that shows in conduct. Note the telling phrase: a truth measured by the godliness it produces. And the hope rests on a striking title for God — apseudēs, “the God who does not lie,” a word found only here, promising eternal life “before times eternal” (pro chronōn aiōniōn), before time itself began. In a world whose gods were famous liars, the ground of the promise is that this one cannot be false to his word.
⚠ God and Christ, both called “our Saviour,” two verses apart. The proclamation is entrusted “by the command of God our Saviour” (v3), and the greeting comes “from… Christ Jesus our Saviour” (v4). The Pastorals apply sōtēr to the Father far more than the rest of Paul does — and here they lay the same title on the Father and the Son in adjacent lines without a seam. “Titus, my true child according to a common faith” — gnēsios, genuine, legitimate, the same word used of Timothy at 1 Timothy 1:2; the two lieutenants are Paul’s sons in the same sense.
“I LEFT you behind in Crete… to set right what was left undone.” The verb (epidiorthoō) is a builder’s or a doctor’s word for putting straight what is still crooked — the congregation is unfinished, not broken, and Titus is there to complete it. The single practical instruction: “appoint elders in every town.” ⚠ Crete was proverbially a hard posting (verse 12 will say why), and the letter is essentially a commission for organising raw congregations on a difficult island.
⚠ “The husband of one wife.” Mias gynaikos anēr — literally “a one-woman man,” and one of the genuinely contested phrases in the letters. It has been read three ways: married only once (no remarriage even after widowhood), married to only one woman at a time (against polygamy), or simply faithful to his wife — a man of one woman. The Greek will bear all three, and the history of the office has turned on the choice. KJV “the husband of one wife”; NIV “faithful to his wife”; NWT “a husband of one wife.” We keep the literal phrase and let the ambiguity stand, because resolving it in English decides a question the Greek leaves open. “Believing children” (tekna pista) can also mean “faithful” children — another undecidable.
⚠ The office has two names here, and they are the same office. Verse 5 says appoint presbyteroi, “elders”; verse 7 gives the qualifications of the “overseer” (episkopos, the word later English made into “bishop”) — and the “for” that joins them shows the writer is still describing the same man. In the earliest church “elder” and “overseer” are two words for one role, not two ranks; the bishop-set-over-elders came later. The same interchange happens at Acts 20, where the Ephesian “elders” are told the Spirit made them “overseers.” It is one of the clearest windows in the New Testament onto how simple the first church order was.
“As God’s STEWARD.” Theou oikonomon — the overseer runs God’s household the way a steward runs an estate he does not own; the authority is real and entirely delegated. Then the list, five things he must not be (self-willed, quick-tempered, a drunkard, a striker, greedy for shameful gain) and six he must (hospitable, a lover of good, sōphrōn — sound-minded, sensible — just, holy, self-controlled). ⚠ Note that all but one are matters of character, not skill or doctrine; the single professional requirement comes last.
“Holding fast to the faithful word… able both to exhort in the sound teaching and to rebuke.” The one competence asked of him is doctrinal, and it is double-edged: to encourage with healthy teaching and to refute those who contradict it. The Pastorals’ medical metaphor is here again — teaching that is hygiainō, healthy — and it sets up the confrontation of the next paragraph.
“Empty talkers and DECEIVERS OF THE MIND, especially those of the circumcision.” Phrenapatai — those who trick the mind — and the trouble at Crete has a Jewish-Christian edge (“those of the circumcision,” and “Jewish myths” at verse 14), teachers upsetting “whole households” for aischrou kerdous, “shameful gain.” The charge is not only error but profiteering — the same money-note that runs through 1 Timothy.
⚠ “A prophet of their own” — and Paul quotes a pagan and endorses him. The line — “Cretans are always liars, evil beasts, lazy gluttons” — is attributed to Epimenides of Knossos, a Cretan seer and poet of perhaps the sixth century BC, and it comes with a built-in twist: a Cretan is calling all Cretans liars, the ancient knot logicians named the Epimenides paradox (if he speaks true, he lies). ⚠ The slur had a specific cause — Cretans showed visitors the “tomb of Zeus,” which to a Greek was a lie on its face, since Zeus does not die. Two further curiosities: the writer calls this pagan a prophētēs, “prophet,” and flatly says “this testimony is true”; and the same Epimenides is the likeliest source of the half-line Paul quotes at Athens, “in him we live and move and have our being” (Acts 17:28). Pagan poetry pressed into Christian service, twice, from one obscure Cretan.
“Rebuke them SHARPLY, so that they may be sound in the faith.” Apotomōs is “cuttingly,” abruptly — from the verb to cut off — and it sounds harsh until the purpose clause lands: the sharpness is surgical, aimed at making them healthy (hygiainō again). The rebuke is not punishment but treatment; the goal is a cure, not a defeat.
“Jewish myths and the commands of men.” The error is a legalism of human tradition — rules about purity and food, to judge by the next verse — and the phrase “commands of men” deliberately echoes the charge Jesus laid on the Pharisees (“teaching as doctrines the commandments of men,” Mark 7:7). What looks like extra scruple is set down as a turning away from the truth.
⚠ “To the pure all things are pure.” A compact maxim — panta kathara tois katharois — and the letter’s answer to the purity rules the false teachers were pushing: defilement is not in foods but in people. It is the same verdict as Jesus’ “nothing outside a person can defile” (Mark 7:15) and Paul’s “nothing is unclean in itself” (Romans 14:14). ⚠ The sting is in the second half: for the defiled “nothing is pure — but their very mind and conscience are defiled.” The problem was never the food; it was the eye that looked at it.
“They profess to know God, but by their works they DENY him.” The letter’s sharpest line, and its whole theology of conduct in one sentence: knowledge of God is measured by deeds, and a life can be a denial that the lips never speak. The final word is adokimos — “failing the test,” the term for metal that will not pass assay or a coin found counterfeit — here “for any good work, worthless.” ⚠ “Good works” is a refrain of this short letter (it sounds six times in three chapters); against teachers whose religion is talk, Titus answers with a faith that has to show.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation keeps the exact / distinct words: “a slave of God” for doulos theou, Paul’s title only here, the prophets’ own; “godliness” for eusebeia, the Pastorals’ keyword; “the God who does not lie” for the hapax apseudēs; both Father and Son kept as “our Saviour” in adjacent verses; “the husband of one wife” left literal and its three readings laid out; the “elder” of verse 5 and the “overseer” of verse 7 shown to be one office; “God’s steward” for oikonomos; the “sound” (healthy) teaching kept as the medical metaphor; and “worthless” for adokimos, the failed-assay word.
Echoes paid. “God our Saviour,” as at 1 Timothy 1:1; the “true child” that Titus and Timothy (1 Timothy 1:2) both are; the “sound teaching” of 1 Timothy 1:10, the shared medical metaphor of the Pastorals; the “slave” title Paul more usually attaches to Christ (Romans 1:1); the “overseer” named with deacons at Philippians 1:1; the “circumcision” party who unsettle the churches, as at Galatians 1:7; and the “commands of men” that echo Jesus on the Pharisees (Mark 7).
Echoes planted. “Good works,” the refrain that runs the length of the letter and reaches its height at 2:14, a people “zealous for good works”; the grace “that trains us” of 2:11-12, the letter’s most quoted sentence; and the great baptismal line of 3:5, saved “not by works of righteousness… but according to his mercy, through the washing of rebirth.”
Titus is new to the library — the shortest of the three Pastorals, and a working commission for organising raw congregations on a hard island. Next in this book: chapter 2 — how the older and younger, men and women, and slaves are to live; and the sentence the whole letter turns on: “the grace of God has appeared, bringing salvation to all people, TRAINING us… to live sensibly, justly and godly in the present age.”