Philippians 1 — The Mister Translation
Translator’s Notes
⚠ He does not call himself an apostle. In most of his letters to congregations Paul leads with the title — and in Galatians he defends it in the first six words. Here he is simply “Paul and Timothy, slaves of Christ Jesus,” on level footing with his young colleague. Nothing in this letter needs defending; it is a thank-you note to the one congregation that never gave him trouble, and the omission of the credential is the first sign of it. ⚠ The omission is not unique to Philippians: 1 and 2 Thessalonians drop the title as well, and 1 Thessalonians 1:1 is barer still — three names and no description at all, not even “slave.” What those three letters have in common is that Paul’s standing is not under attack in them.
⚠ “With the overseers and servants.” Episkopoi and diakonoi — and this is the earliest sighting of the two words together as some kind of recognised role. But it is worth being precise about how little they carry yet: episkopos is a plain compound meaning “one who watches over” (used in ordinary Greek of a supervisor or inspector), and it is plural here, so whatever it is, it is not a single bishop over a city; and diakonos means a servant, someone who waits at table. English “bishop” and “deacon” descend from these two words carrying centuries of later structure with them. KJV prints “with the bishops and deacons,” which is a fair etymology and an anachronism at the same time — the offices those English words now name did not exist when Paul dictated the line; ASV “bishops and deacons”; NIV “overseers and deacons”; NWT “overseers and ministerial servants.” We keep both words plain.
⚠ The word to watch in this letter is JOY. Chara and its verb chairō appear about sixteen times in four short chapters — more densely than anywhere else in Paul — and the man writing is in prison awaiting a verdict that could go either way. That is the whole tension of Philippians, and it starts here, in verse 4: “making my petition with joy.”
“Your partnership in the gospel.” Koinōnia — the business-partnership word this library met at 1 Corinthians 1:9 — and here it is nearly literal. The Philippians had sent Paul money, repeatedly, from the very first days (4:15–16), and this letter is in large part a receipt. Read that way, “partnership in the gospel from the first day until now” means something closer to you have been my financial partners in this work than to a warm feeling of togetherness.
“The one who began a good work in you will bring it to completion.” Enarxamenos and epitelesei are both words used of religious ceremonies — beginning and finishing a rite properly — and both, in ordinary Greek, of any job carried through to the end. Note that the subject is God, not the congregation: the sentence is a statement of confidence in the one who started it, and the “good work” may well include their generosity itself.
⚠ “With the inward affection of Christ Jesus.” En splanchnois — literally in the bowels or entrails. In Greek and Hebrew alike the seat of the deepest feeling is the gut, not the heart, and this is the strongest word for it there is; the related verb splanchnizomai is what the Gospels use of Jesus being moved with compassion. English has no dignified equivalent — “bowels” is now comic and “heart” is a substitution — so the note has to carry the anatomy. KJV is unembarrassed: “in the bowels of Jesus Christ”; ASV “in the tender mercies”; NIV and NWT both retreat to “affection.”
⚠ He prays that their love may grow — in DISCERNMENT. This is the surprise of the prayer. Not that love overflow into warmth, but “in full knowledge (epignōsis) and all aisthēsis” — a word for perception, the trained faculty of a taster or a critic; it is the root of aesthetic. And its purpose is “to test out (dokimazein) what really matters” — ta diapheronta, literally “the things that differ,” hence the things that make a difference. Paul prays for a congregation whose love has taste: able to tell what matters from what merely presents itself. KJV “that ye may approve things that are excellent”; NWT “that you may ascertain the more important things.”
“My chains… throughout the whole praetorium.” Praitorion is a Latin word in Greek dress, and it is deliberately vague: it can mean a governor’s residence, a military headquarters, or — in Rome — the Praetorian Guard itself, the emperor’s own troops. If the last, then Paul’s chains have introduced Christ into the imperial barracks, which is the kind of irony he cannot resist and does not spell out. ⚠ It is also one of the two clues (with “Caesar’s household,” 4:22) on which the traditional Rome-imprisonment reading rests; Ephesus and Caesarea have both been proposed instead.
⚠ The claim underneath the paragraph. He does not say his imprisonment is being endured; he says it has “turned out rather for the ADVANCE of the gospel” — prokopē, a military and commercial word for cutting a way forward, making progress. The chains are not an obstacle the mission survived. They are how it got into the barracks.
⚠ This is one of the most disarming paragraphs Paul ever wrote. Some people in Rome are preaching Christ specifically to get at him — “out of envy and rivalry… out of selfish ambition, not purely, supposing they will stir up trouble for me in my chains.” His response is not a rebuttal. It is: ti gar? — “What of it?” — and then, “in every way, whether in pretense or in truth, Christ is being announced; and in this I rejoice.” ⚠ Note what he is not saying: he is not calling their message false. Their motives are rotten and their content is Christ, and he distinguishes the two so cleanly that he can be glad of the second while naming the first. It is worth setting beside Galatians 1:8, where a different message earns a curse twice over. Bad motives he shrugs at; a different gospel he anathematises. The man is not inconsistent — he simply cares about the content and not the credit.
“Selfish ambition.” Eritheia originally meant working for hire, then the self-serving spirit of a hired hand, then partisan intrigue — and it reappears at 2:3, where the antidote is the mind of Christ. KJV “of contention”; ASV “of faction.”
⚠ “My straining expectation.” Apokaradokia is a wonderful and possibly Pauline coinage, and it is a picture: apo + kara (head) + dokeuein (to watch) — the posture of a man with his head thrust forward, craning, watching the road for something that has not appeared yet. It occurs twice in the New Testament, both in Paul (here and Romans 8:19, of creation itself craning for the revealing of God’s children). No English word does it; “eager expectation” is the usual retreat and loses the neck. KJV “earnest expectation”; NWT “eager expectation.”
“Whether through life or through death.” Sōtēria in verse 19 is genuinely ambiguous — deliverance from prison, or ultimate salvation — and the ambiguity survives into verse 20, where either verdict serves the same end: Christ “magnified in my body.” He is not saying he expects to be acquitted. He is saying the outcome is not the point.
⚠ “To me, to live is Christ and to die is gain.” In Greek it is barely a sentence — emoi gar to zēn Christos kai to apothanein kerdos, ten words with no verb, an epigram carved down to nothing. The compression is the effect, and every translation that smooths it out (“for me, living means living for Christ…”) adds words the Greek refuses to spend. KJV keeps it tight: “For to me to live is Christ, and to die is gain.” Kerdos is a commercial word — profit, the plus side of a ledger.
⚠ And then he cannot decide. This is the most startling turn in the chapter and it is easy to read past: Paul says outright that he does not know which he would choose. “I am hemmed in between the two” (synechomai, held under pressure from both sides), wanting “to cast off and be with Christ — which is far better by much,” but staying is “more necessary for your sake.” A man in chains, weighing execution against release, and concluding that the deciding factor is what other people need.
“To cast off.” Analysai is used of a ship weighing anchor to put to sea and of striking camp to break for home. Death, in the metaphor, is not an end but a departure — and the destination is stated: “and be with Christ.” KJV “to depart”; Douay “to be dissolved,” following the Vulgate’s dissolvi, which takes the word the other way.
“I know that I will remain.” Having said he cannot choose, he concludes that he will stay — not by revelation but by reasoning: they need him, therefore he expects to be given back to them. It is a confidence about God’s intentions inferred from other people’s need, which is a characteristically Pauline move. ⚠ Whether it happened is unknown. The traditional account has him released, travelling further, and executed at Rome later under Nero; the record simply stops.
⚠ “Live out your citizenship worthily.” Politeuesthe — and Paul had a perfectly ordinary word for “walk” or “conduct yourselves” (peripateō, which he uses constantly) and did not use it here. Politeuomai means to live as a politēs, a citizen — to discharge one’s duties in the public life of a city. And Philippi was a Roman colony, settled with army veterans, unusually proud of its citizenship (the magistrates who beat Paul there panicked precisely when they learned he was a citizen, Acts 16:37–39). To that congregation Paul says: exercise your citizenship worthily of the gospel — and at 3:20 he lands the other half, “our politeuma, our commonwealth, is in the heavens.” Every version smooths it to conduct or behaviour, and the local point vanishes. KJV “let your conversation be as it becometh the gospel” (using “conversation” in its old sense of one’s whole manner of life); NIV “conduct yourselves”; NWT “behave in a manner worthy.” We keep the citizenship.
“With one soul struggling side by side.” Synathlountes — from athleō, to compete as an athlete; struggling together as teammates in a contest. And “not being startled” (pturomenoi) is a word used of a horse shying at something in the road. The images are from the stadium and the stable, not the courtroom.
⚠ The sentence people skip. “To you it was given as a gift… not only to believe in him but also to suffer for him.” The verb is echaristhē, from charis, grace — it was graced to you. Suffering is placed on the same list as faith, and both are called presents. It is not a sentiment anyone invents; it is what a man in chains wrote to people who were about to be in trouble themselves.
Patterns worth carrying forward
Where this translation keeps the exact / distinct words: “slaves” for douloi with no apostolic title in front of it, because the omission is the letter’s first signal; “overseers and servants” for episkopoi and diakonoi, keeping the plain compounds rather than the later offices “bishop” and “deacon”; “partnership” for koinōnia, which here is nearly literal — they had been sending money; “inward affection” for splanchna, with the note carrying the anatomy English cannot; “test out what really matters” for dokimazein ta diapheronta; “straining expectation” for apokaradokia, the craned neck; “cast off” for analysai, a ship weighing anchor; and “live out your citizenship” for politeuesthe, which every version flattens to conduct and which is aimed at a Roman colony’s proudest possession.
Echoes paid. Koinōnia, the business-partnership word, from 1 Corinthians 1:9, here with actual money behind it; doulos from the opening of Romans 1, but this time with no “apostle” beside it; and the contrast with Galatians 1:8 — there a different gospel earns a double curse, here rival preachers’ poisonous motives earn a shrug, because Paul distinguishes the content from the credit.
Echoes planted. JOY, sounded four times already and about sixteen times before the letter ends — from a prison cell; eritheia, selfish ambition, named in the rivals here and turned on the congregation itself at 2:3, where the cure is the mind of Christ; citizenship, which pays off at 3:20 (“our commonwealth is in the heavens”); “whether through life or through death”, the indifference to outcome that chapter 3 will restate as counting everything loss; and suffering as a gift, the strangest sentence in the chapter and the seed of chapter 3’s “the fellowship of his sufferings.”
Next in this book: Philippians 2 — “do nothing from selfish ambition… but in humility count others more important than yourselves,” and then the great hymn, quite possibly older than the letter: he who was in the form of God did not clutch at equality with God but emptied himself, took a slave’s form, and became obedient to the point of death — death on a cross; therefore God highly exalted him and gave him the name above every name. Then Timothy and Epaphroditus, who nearly died of it.